The mass media including TV, Radio and newspaper influence our society and shape our opinions and characters. What is your opinion?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the influence of the mass media on our society. There is a wide range of factors that account for why this is happening. These days, there is an unending debate among people about the influence of the mass media including TV, radio, and newspaper. In my opinion, mass media has a significant influence on the public. This essay will discuss in detail influence of mass media with help of few examples in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, there are myriad of reasons to support my opinion. One of the most important is that mass media represents the general public and we tend to think it is right. For example, any news shown on TV or published in the newspaper people believe that it is true. Moreover, advertisement agencies are using mass media, such as radio and TV, to promote their products. For instance, any new product, such as toothpaste or soap, is advertised on TV or radio.
Secondly, it is irrefutable that celebrities are linked with mass media. They have the power to convince the general public. Therefore, mass media is using them to influence public opinion. For example, a famous celebrity in India is promoting tourism through the TV. In addition, availability of mass media to all population and classes also influence the large public.
In summary, as explained in aforementioned paragraphs, society gets influenced by mass media including TV, Radio, and newspaper as it has the power to convince the general public. In my view, mass media has a significant effect on people’s opinion and character.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary, such as, in my opinion, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9815498155 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85047647945 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512915129151 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8028668957 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4117647059 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2352941176 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389167814516 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128693118989 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860191545826 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260919590314 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650826830257 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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