These days , there is an ongoing debate between people that information revolution has drastically changed the medium of revolution. Some people argue that it has negative effect while others has different point of view. This essay will discuss the reasons that why information advancement has changed the mass communication in more beneficial way.
To commence with, there are numerous examples that information booming is important for society and individuals. First and foremost, technology has changed drastically the way of information sharing and more dynamically. Moreover, It has also made the communication fast and more efficient. To instance, with the advent of internet, people can access huge amount of data in just a few clicks about the related topic. Hence, there are numerous reliable grounds to support the belief that advancement in information has changed for better life of humans and communities.
Furthermore, with the improvement in information people can interact with each other by social media even while sitting miles away. Social media is very flexible and fast as well as people can share their views to important people of nation which is much difficult otherwise. As a tangible example, a scientific research taken by the prestigious university has asserted that the world wide the progress rate has greatly accelerated. Therefore, it can be taken into account that this revolution is indeed required for growth.
To recapitulate, this essay discussed that information revolution has changed the mass media in a better way and made it faster. Therefore, in my opinion its advantages far outweighs it disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 5.75862068966 313% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47265625 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99124371263 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5703125 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9992441315 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.071428571 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185737106312 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065591355747 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598568843674 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126213171794 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691195512961 0.0609392437508 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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