Cheap overseas travel does more damage than good.
Airline expenses are becoming more and more inexpensive. While some argue it causes significant damage to the environment, others think the positive effects cause due to overseas travel outweigh the damage cause to the environment. This essay will discuss why the inexpensive overseas travel is a positive development to the world and humans.
It is very clear that airline companies have a significant role to play in the destruction of the environment. Their airplanes run on fossil fuel and causing a widespread damage to the environment. For instance, overseas flights in particular do the damage to the upper atmosphere. In saying thought, this problem has minor issues compared with the positive impacts on the world.
Globalization and overseas travelling has brought the human life to another level and made the understanding about other humans into a positive level. This reduces the problems occurred within different human races and made this a peaceful world. For example, a research has shown that overseas travelling and overseas education has broaden the understanding about other cultures and religions and crime rate has reduced in a dramatical manner. In sum, overseas travelling has significant impact to the world.
This essay discussed the ways in which low cost airline services cause environmental problems but the positive impacts derived from cross cultural communication overweight the issues. In my opinion, decreasing the airline prices is a good thing to promote peace and cultural understanding among humans.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'widespread damage'.
Suggestion: widespread damage
...irplanes run on fossil fuel and causing a widespread damage to the environment. For instance, overs...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...ade this a peaceful world. For example, a research has shown that overseas travelling and ...
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Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'broadened'.
Suggestion: broadened
...s travelling and overseas education has broaden the understanding about other cultures ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in particular, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48739495798 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95980892854 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554621848739 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6098897638 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.461538462 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216731071246 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818132547177 0.0925447433944 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636567330829 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127419296132 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775968847143 0.0609392437508 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.