Art is considered as an essential part of all cultures throughout the world.
However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business.
Why do you think that is?
What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?
With the advancement of technology, it has been observed that more than 50% of young generation or moving towards Information Technology only. Successfull people like Bill Gates, Mark Zuckerberg and companies like Amazon, Google has deeply impressed the youth. Due to the immense integration of technology in our day to day life, people are just focusing on latest technology in their career path. Multiple measures can be taken to overcome this and make people realize the importance of other fields such as arts.
The worth of art has started being ignored, and the new generation is rapidly moving towards new technology due to its strong bonding within their life. Neglecting the importance of arts need to be stopped as it represents your country at an international level. Arts plays a vital role in our day to day life. Recreational activities helps children and family to step out from their home, and enjoy the different phase of life, which is essential.
Government should take mandatory steps to avoid such ignorance by organizing local events and promoting arts. By this way they can create jobs, which will increase the demand. Government should consider arts as a seperate entity while planning a budget.
In conclusion, people should not ignore the importance of such fields. Government should take proper steps to keep a balance among them. This seems to me be the only way to overcome the turn over to of youth to one direction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04979253112 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6885213219 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622406639004 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3018291009 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9285714286 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173763716588 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558963939371 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479975610028 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930870687553 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486802384996 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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