The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring?
As it is apparent that we are in 21th century, in this modern era we have seen lot of changes and can see more advancement in future.I believe that in upcoming era we can see changes like education,health etctera.
To begin with,technology is becoming more advance day by day which is making individual lifestyle more easy and comfortable.Firstly, the main change that people can see in future is education. Schools are becoming more advanced and nowadays few schools in cities has smart classes and in future folk will see smart institutions in countryside also. Secondly,health related facilities would also be develope as compared to current time for example in present time only professional doctors are able to operate the patient but in future modern mechanis will do operations which make like more easier
Furthermore,nuclear weapons will also tend to develop which will automatically create a peace in up coming time. Moreover, as it is estimated that the crime rate amoung would also be reduced by taking some strict steps by state like keeping there eyes on people.In addition,human work will replaced by roberts such as construction of building and so on.
To conclude, change is a part of life with the passage of time every thing change specially the development of country
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1179245283 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20097481481 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.1652451896 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.833333333 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.3333333333 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.6666666667 7.06120827912 293% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0976196307798 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476337745379 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0215159760078 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0618609548225 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0081303449055 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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