hotel disappointment letter
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my utter disappointment with your hotel and the way
your staff is ruining your repute
A week ago, my company named ways software, used one of your conference room for
executive meeting session.The agenda of meeting was to obtain modern technological
assets and it was joined online by some of our office bearers and agent currently
residing in UAE.
We were faced a ton of problems during the meeting.Internet connectivity was one of
them.We immediately contacted the main office, requesting a redressal of our
grievance but the rude act of manger had shaken my belief in your ability to provide top
notch customer care all the time.He was stick to his point that we paid only for the room, not
for cyber facilities.This unprofessional attitude created an unpleasant scene.
Under the given state of affairs obsequiously request you to kindly conduct our inquiry in
this regard and take the strict step to avoid such unfortunate happening in the future.
I hope that you will deal with this matter promptly as it is causing me considerable in
convenience.
You’re faithfully
M.IRFAN.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...nce room for executive meeting session.The agenda of meeting was to obtain modern ...
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Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[7]
Message: Possible agreement error. You should probably use: 'were'.
Suggestion: were
...e meeting session.The agenda of meeting was to obtain modern technological assets ...
^^^
Line 8, column 51, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Internet
...ed a ton of problems during the meeting.Internet connectivity was one of them.We immedi...
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Line 9, column 6, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
....Internet connectivity was one of them.We immediately contacted the main office, ...
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Line 10, column 86, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: top-notch
...en my belief in your ability to provide top notch customer care all the time.He was stick...
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Line 11, column 34, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
...e top notch customer care all the time.He was stick to his point that we paid onl...
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Line 12, column 22, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...for the room, not for cyber facilities.This unprofessional attitude created an unpl...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16402116402 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9999580076 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.719576719577 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 16.3608247423 226% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 158.827453546 44.8134815571 354% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 195.2 76.5299724578 255% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.8 16.8248392259 225% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.29896907216 326% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0829884810708 0.216113520407 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0289431272529 0.0766984524023 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578862545059 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0271413115422 0.12726935374 21% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978593904488 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 8.37731958763 260% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 70.7449484536 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 7.45979381443 237% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 7.59969072165 138% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 8.62886597938 330% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 8.54432989691 197% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 8.15463917526 356% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.