Children form the foundation of the world, they grow up to become the future of what the country represents. Their performance at school is a consequence of the healthy lifestyle which is provided to them. Children with healthy standards of living and eating outgrow others effectively compared to malnourished and under priviledged individuals.
Firstly, children mark the future of a society and country. Having a healthy meal is a basic requirement of every school going child. Its not uncommon to witness children surviving on fast foods, instead of home made or healthy school made meals. Healthy meals provide adequate nourishement with right quantities of ingredients which support growth of mind and body. Recent studies conducted in India, have proved how providing the right food with definite levels of iodine salt and calcium have worked effectively towards brain development of children. Secondly, fast foods provide empty calories keeping the belly full but providing no nourishment , they increase obesity along with added expenses which account to malnourished obese individuals in future.
The contribution towards healthy meals should be both by government as well as parents. For instance, in India government programs have made it mandatory to provide daily breakfast to children for free.Not only has this reduced malnourshed kids subsequently it has created enthusiasm in them to accompany their friends during meals. Parents should also work towards cooking melas at home using fresh vegetables or providing adequate fruits which add on to bulding good immunity and health of a child.Working mothers can opt to hire maids or cooks, or have more meals cooked and frozen to sustain their children.
Chilren of today mark the future of tomorrow, providing amenities and healthy meals is essential for their growth.Together the society can work towards promoting health standards in younger school going age groups with advertisements and effective laws from govermentto support them.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Children with healthy standards of living and eating outgrow others effectively compared to malnourished and under priviledged individuals.
Error: priviledged Suggestion: privileged
Sentence: Parents should also work towards cooking melas at home using fresh vegetables or providing adequate fruits which add on to bulding good immunity and health of a child.Working mothers can opt to hire maids or cooks, or have more meals cooked and frozen to sustain their children.
Error: bulding Suggestion: building
Error: melas Suggestion: meals
Sentence: Chilren of today mark the future of tomorrow, providing amenities and healthy meals is essential for their growth.Together the society can work towards promoting health standards in younger school going age groups with advertisements and effective laws from govermentto support them.
Error: Chilren Suggestion: Children
Error: govermentto Suggestion: government to
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flaws:
No serious flaws found.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 311 350
No. of Characters: 1667 1500
No. of Different Words: 183 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.199 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.36 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.715 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 134 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 105 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.923 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.612 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.385 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.356 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.559 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.102 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 650, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... belly full but providing no nourishment , they increase obesity along with added ...
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Line 3, column 749, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...count to malnourished obese individuals in future. The contribution towards healthy me...
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Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...lthy meals should be both by government as well as parents. For instance, in India governm...
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Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Not
...de daily breakfast to children for free.Not only has this reduced malnourshed kids ...
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Line 5, column 501, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Working
...ing good immunity and health of a child.Working mothers can opt to hire maids or cooks,...
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Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Together
...thy meals is essential for their growth.Together the society can work towards promoting ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53246753247 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85182503376 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603896103896 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.6246623891 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.076923077 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309057386493 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112706469433 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388518302455 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186499285197 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484327240931 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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