happiness. why is it difficult to define and what factors are important.
One of the key factors for a healthy life is happiness. However, there is no set definition as to what constitutes happiness. The factors involved in gaining this can be different for different people. This essay will discuss the difficulties in defining happiness and the various ways in which people can achieve it.
Most people describe happiness as a state of being free from worry or being at peace with one self. In other words, personal wellbeing and absence of worldly tensions is what makes them contented. While for the others it can be simple excitement at experiencing something new or joy while doing activities which gives them pleasure. Happiness can range from satisfaction to elation or overwhelming sense of joy. As people differ in their thoughts, sensibilities and character, the idea of what makes them happy is distinct too. Personally, for me happiness would be to be at peace consciously and subconsciously.
Several factors are responsible for acquiring happiness. For some, happiness is accomplishing simple skills like learning to paint or cooking a meal.This is especially true for youngsters who are jubilant at successfully learning how to ride a bike. Others are satisfied when they do well in their jobs. Power and wealth can act as a driving force for many as is seen with many successful business tycoons. Most people feel joyful when they are surrounded by their loved ones. It is no wonder that people feel cheerful on festivals as they spent time with their families, although there are some who prefer to be alone.
In conclusion, happiness can both be defined and achieved in various ways. It is of great importance that children are motivated to indulge in activities which brings them joy so that they can grow into positive adults.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04406779661 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84813147797 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566101694915 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4160204197 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104354556793 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455079518392 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629472932714 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776941694268 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717036029497 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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