The bar chart below shows the reasons for internet usage among British adults(2001)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Women
...y shy of 40 and 20 percent respectively.Women were more likely to use internet for bu...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mailing. Banking was equally employed by two-fifth of both males and females. ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 664.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 129.0 196.424390244 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14728682171 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37013600491 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58038250959 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658914728682 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2168519383 43.030603864 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.8 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172247382263 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102642023795 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937812446453 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126234616872 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889081980646 0.0819641961636 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

flaws:
1. No. of Words: 129 200
Minimum 150 words wanted

2. need more for summary, like:
Additionally, the rates of banking and commercial (vendor) users were equal among two genders.

3. put same patterns together, like:

male and female equal: mail, banking, and commercial (vendor)
male more: games
female more: personal medical research, commercial (consumer)

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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 5 10
No. of Words: 129 200
No. of Characters: 639 1000
No. of Different Words: 84 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.377 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.915 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.331 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 49 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 37 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 8 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.008 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.2 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.516 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.873 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.106 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4