what are the sentences you have learnt? Why?
What can you learn from your mistake
In your opinion, how can you avoid that mistake?
I have learnt English for three months, I learn new things but I also make some mistakes, this is result after five years I did not study English.
Firstly, I can write basic sentences or make elementary conversations which are in the past I can not. Secondly, I would be describe a situation or a people. For example, describe children is lost from their parents, or talk about my job, my family..
On the one hand, I have a problem with grammar, vocabulary. I do not know some of noun phrases. Specially, I can not listen sections that are quickly speed, I have to listen many’s the time. However, I conceived that this mistake would be help me improve listening skill and reading as well.
In my opinion, this is common problem of beginning people but we trying us best avoid them by learning sentences that contain noun phrase, and listen and repeat. I believe that one day we will be listening and speaking better with second language.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 248, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...parents, or talk about my job, my family.. On the one hand, I have a problem with...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 13.0 41.998997996 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 168.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66071428571 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59102295307 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0190491504 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13238873781 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447876886604 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433264121073 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727932932739 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139260534876 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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