Industrial development, economic independence and prosperity of country depend on its citizens. Recent years, we are witnessing an imbalance in number of old and young people in different countries. Most people claim that having a large proportion of young adults has more positive aspects than negative. From my point of view country should accent on raising educated youth to maintain healthy economy and infrastructure.
It is widely known, young generation is future of the country. They are energetic, creative, ambitious and open mind to new advancements and approaches. Young people can bring new ideas free from conservatism for further development of economy and industry sector. The number of young leaders, politicians, inventors and scientists are increasing. For instance, the most popular social media called "Facebook" which makes communication easily accessible and affordable, was developed by Mark Zhuckerberg when he was only 20 years old. Nowadays, he is successful businessman inspiring many children to work hard and be open to new things.
Young people can learn faster, therefore share with their knowledge and ideas globally. The majority of youth is involved in IT area, finance and entrepreneurship. Maintaining sustainable development in these fields ensures the prosperity of country and wealth of nation.
On the other hand, significance of older generation cannot be denied. They have vast experience and knowledge that could be essential in decision making. Young generation should not ignore their contribution and take into account their advice. Without knowing past youth are not able to build the future.
To conclude, despite the fact that young citizens can contribute to the the country, elderly people should not be considered as burden for society.
- The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 40
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too invaluable to be shared freely.Discuss both views and five yo 75
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 84
- In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transportDisucss both the 95
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of the young aldults compared with the number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantage 95
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65201465201 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11945142669 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644688644689 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2419866269 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7222222222 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05555555556 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108442102838 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337488483695 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348640947492 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0564906973838 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293211108691 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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