The ways of upbringing children are among the commonest debated quandaries in the modern societies. One of these affairs is letting a child take decisions. It is asserted by a category of people that it results in producing uncooperative adults, while others argue that, it is of significant importance in raising better generations. Both of these beliefs will be discussed in this essay, before a conclusion is made.
In the early years of a child's life, toddlers try to prove their capacity of dealing with all daily activities as good as an adult. This usually results in lots of arguments with parents regarding the meals,cloths, and even the way they play. Eventually, some parents may surrender and let the child choose what they like. Although this may save them time and effort in the present moment, it results in raising careless adolescents as well as providing the community with residents who only care about themselves.
This strategy of parenting lack interaction between the family and lessen the significance of daily communication. To illustrate, a friend of mine who used this way of dealing with her son when he was a toddler, ended up into becoming the supplier of money when her child grew. She is now complaining of absence of communication as he only contact her when he is in need for money.
On the other hand,some parents claim that it is a daily chance to enhance their children's personality development by allowing them to take decisions.Nevertheless, leaving the child to make a choice they have their way of control. In this strategy the parents give the child couple of available and acceptable choices. Although the fact that the decision maker is the child , the parents already gave the original choices, which were all applicable. In this way ,demonstrably, the toddler learn how to pick a choice and still be nurtured in a close-knit family.
Personally, as an example, I have used this strategy while raising my children,they get substantial benefits from it. It didn't only increase their self-steam but also made them better negotiators.
To conclude, in my opinion, allowing children to make decisions, if handled carefully, provide an exceptional opportunity for building strong person who trust them-self as well as being able to communicate with others
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , cloths
...guments with parents regarding the meals,cloths, and even the way they play. Eventually...
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Line 4, column 340, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'contacts'.
Suggestion: contacts
... of absence of communication as he only contact her when he is in need for money. On...
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Line 6, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , some
... in need for money. On the other hand,some parents claim that it is a daily chance...
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Line 6, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nevertheless
...ment by allowing them to take decisions.Nevertheless, leaving the child to make a choice the...
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Line 6, column 373, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...act that the decision maker is the child , the parents already gave the original c...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., which were all applicable. In this way ,demonstrably, the toddler learn how to p...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
... this strategy while raising my children,they get substantial benefits from it. It di...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ey get substantial benefits from it. It didnt only increase their self-steam but also...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, well, while, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10052910053 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05112007074 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2698497518 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.111111111 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136994171245 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397742545953 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424882999269 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709227335339 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257757277492 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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