Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to make people recycle more is to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
It has been asserted that, domestic waste products are not recycled enough, and therefore, the principle method to increase recycling is by implementing a law. In my opinion, although the presence of laws is of substantial value, there are other areas of work to achieve this goal.
It is widely accepted that, as laws are applied to everyone, it would be the best strategy to get goals achieved. Firstly, this give a clear message that recycling is an acknowledged value by the country's leader. Moreover if there is a law, there will be a method to track the performance of the whole involved community, including the government itself. Thus there will be punishment ways to face any law-breakers.
To illustrate, one of my colleagues never used her seat-belt in her home-country as the law there is redundant, but when ever she travel, she makes sure that,she is wearing it before starting her journey.
On the other hand,when a quandary affects a community, it needs the interaction between the whole society as well as requesting their awareness. This demonstrates the importance of mass education using different available media. Subsequently,the government will change the citizenry's culture gradually, and thus , will enhance their voluntary participation in recycling.
For instance, if a family members hear ,in the car radio, about the impact of the recycling of the waste products on the economy, then they see consistent reports about its role in fighting the global worming in the TV and continuously saw the labeled disposal containers in the streets, they will definitely express more effort in following recycling strategies.
To conclude, presence of laws is a substantial way to implement houses' waste recycling , although it needs the integration with other strategies such as changing the culture
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27491408935 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04575336969 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604810996564 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.734483711 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.916666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18574452053 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572899859158 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049937982006 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893397491248 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385245310114 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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