It has been recognized that, increasing number of people are preferring to live in larger apartment blocks in many different cities. Although this trend could have some disadvantages, the benefits are far more significant than the disadvantages.
One possible affair that could be caused by building larger blocks is that, this will consume more land while producing less number of apartments. to illustrate, an owner of a property with a specific surface area, will produce the half number of apartments if he/she doubled their surface areas.
On the other hand, having a bigger apartment has significant positive effect on a person's will-being. With larger free areas an apartment ,every member of the family will have the opportunity to design his/her personal area. Even children will have expanded places for playing and ruining. For example, a friend of mine, who had a small apartment, had to sell her luxurious dinning table to provide larger area for her children to play, but if she had a bigger apartment she wouldn't be in such a quandary.
Furthermore, a larger apartment means larger windows and balconies, which will allow for more natural air and light sources. The better aeration and light have incredible positive effect on family member's health and welfare. For instance, the more the chance to be more exposed to the sun light, the more the ability of a human body to produce active vitamin D, which play a crucial role in immunity system,thus,allows the body to fight infections and get rid of microbes more sufficiently.
To conclude, living in large-sized apartment blocks has some drawbacks, but these are far more over-weighed by the positive effects of this trend. It has many advantages regarding to person's health and wealth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, regarding, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15331010453 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83413014922 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567944250871 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9161084052 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.769230769 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198761325989 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077725872142 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449798461754 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127341917398 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647689614021 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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