Age discrimination
Age discrimination can be found nowadays in fast phased lifecycle neither during hiring new candidate, promotions are decided based on the person's age. Some people says it’s unfair to discrimination against older, where as other argue it’s fair to retain younger generation than the older due to their diminishing ability. I am inclined towards the age factor should not be a factor while making the decision. The following paragraph analyzes age discrimination against older workers should be made illegal or not.
Firstly, the old aged workers or professionals might have experienced in difficult condition and in various challenges which can be utilized to make the good decision. The knowledge wisdom of the old people are invaluable. For example: Let's consider my father where he done business in paddy and rice trade and has very good knowledge and tricks to tackle the daily business challenges, which cannot be learnt in one day. So old worker should be given fair chance while making decision in promotion or assigning the new role and responsibility.
Secondly, the younger people gets the benefit working with old people where they share their knowledge and experience in tackling the business pressures. For instance, the newly joined fresh graduate does not know the job and how to be done. In this case experience serious people comes in hand to train the younger people to bring to speed in the work.
From the above discussed points, here by I profound my view as older people wisdom of knowledge and experience, they should be given a fair chance in all decision and there should not any discrimination based on age.
To recapitulate, discrimination against older workers should be made illegal by law.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
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Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'did'?
Suggestion: did
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15602836879 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82836488188 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560283687943 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.714138924 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.846153846 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243895751761 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971175494266 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114171288475 0.071462118173 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148125956697 0.151781067708 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129898121999 0.0609392437508 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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