Essay topics:
Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
University is the arguably the most important institution of a students life since one can pursue his very own goal without wasting time on unnecessary, unrelated subjects but it is also the most expensive one. While I agree that potential students should definitely be allowed to continue their education once they've been admitted to an university if they cannot afford the fees, it shouldn't be generalized for all of the students since that alone can create a myriad of problems for the university and the government alike. Because , while university education is definitely of extremely importan...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: THE_EXACTLY_THE[1]
Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the arguably the'. Did you mean 'arguably the'?
Suggestion: arguably the
University is the arguably the most important institution of a student...
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Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...bly the most important institution of a students life since one can pursue his very own ...
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Line 1, column 312, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they've
...llowed to continue their education once theyve been admitted to an university if they ...
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Line 1, column 336, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... education once theyve been admitted to an university if they cannot afford the fe...
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Line 1, column 385, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...sity if they cannot afford the fees, it shouldnt be generalized for all of the students ...
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Line 1, column 413, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...he fees, it shouldnt be generalized for all of the students since that alone can create a ...
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Line 1, column 534, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ersity and the government alike. Because , while university education is definitel...
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Line 1, column 613, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...tely of extremely importance for both a persons life and as a marking stone of a countr...
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Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... of all, students should be admitted to an university via a process of elimination...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...st for choosing the best, capable ones. This students should be tested on various ca...
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Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they've
...man mind to nurture. Furthermore, after theyve been admitted, they should go through r...
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Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this government' or 'those governments'?
Suggestion: this government; those governments
... prove that they are capable of getting those government scholarship programs and that they are ...
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Line 3, column 610, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they've
...inue their study in the university once theyve been admitted but cannot pay their fees...
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Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
... will get mixed in. These students, who arent serious about their studies or their ca...
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Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...me doing unproductive things since they dont have the pressure or need to pay any mo...
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Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they've
...e or need to pay any money anymore once theyve been somehow admitted. Some students wi...
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Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...mission. This kind of situation also doesnt bode well on the government because the...
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Line 7, column 548, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ies like medication and wellfare of the general public suffer, then that will just lead to the...
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Line 7, column 757, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'continuing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: continuing
...balance between who were going to allow to continue their studies by proper exainations, te...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, kind of, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2761.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 544.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07536764706 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69656360294 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459558823529 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 890.1 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.3361452834 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.066666667 118.986275619 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.2666666667 23.4991977007 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 5.21951772744 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327106914293 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117678084176 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653859753758 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210168847442 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029016404326 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 14.1392134831 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.8971910112 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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