Many young people get married before finishing their study and establishing a good job. To what extant do you agree? Please explain.

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Many young people get married before finishing their study and establishing a good job. To what extant do you agree? Please explain.

Marriage is so pivotal for human beings. Therefore, it's natural behavior for many people to got married. There are a big argument regarding the right age of married and what is the correct time of marriage , especially for young people. Some of parents prefer to get their children married and other delay it till the completion of the study and getting a right job. I strongly support the idea that young people should finished their studies first then get married. In the following paragraphs, i will my point of view.

on one hand, Many parents believe that the best time and age for married is after the completion of studying. Therefore, they could find the suitable job which could enable them to earn money. Money is so essential in this stage to give them the chances to establish their life. The right job will help them to feel the self confidence and self dependent. For instance, in Egypt, Young people prefer to get married after joining their job and establish their careers. By this way, we could have the full warranty that the marriage will last for long time and will become stronger. Thus, we will not expected any problems due to lack of responsibilities or money which required for basics needs for marriage.

On the other hand, some people think that the marriage before finishing the study is so useful and have a myriad of benefits. Such as, the stability and will generate the suitable environment for the young people to focus on their studies. Therefore, They will gain the spirit of responsibility and push them for success. However, i'm not agree with this point of view due to young age of the students and may lead to loss of their concentration on the studies.

In conclusion, marriage is so important. however it should be in right time. we need to encourage our students to focus on their studies.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...and what is the correct time of marriage , especially for young people. Some of pa...
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Message: After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ('Some of the parents') or simply say ''Some parents''.
Suggestion: Some of the parents; Some parents
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...paragraphs, i will my point of view. on one hand, Many parents believe that the...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'expect'
Suggestion: expect
...will become stronger. Thus, we will not expected any problems due to lack of responsibil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 320.0 242.827586207 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.746875 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50860264245 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496875 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6551724138 158% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6410784136 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.95 104.977214359 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.9669160288 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252375350265 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761622768368 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847369918269 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152165984051 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841651336555 0.0609392437508 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.1260098522 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.9458128079 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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