The table below show the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the change of visitor numbers of Ashdown Museum before and after it was renovated, while the associated visitor satisfaction is outlined in the pie charts.
Overall, the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum increased significantly throughout the surveyed period. Meanwhile, more tourists felt satisfied with their visiting experience after the museum was refurbished.
To be more specific, the visitor numbers increased about one-third in the two years, from 74,000 to 92,000. As for the satisfaction of these people, the proportion of visitors who felt very satisfied with ...
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
No serious flaws found.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 179 200
No. of Characters: 963 1000
No. of Different Words: 104 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.658 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.38 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.027 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 75 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 59 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.889 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.233 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.398 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.676 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.074 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
The given pie charts display
The given pie charts display the results of visitor's satisfaction after the recent changes made in the Ashdown Museum. In the following paragraphs, I will delineate visitors opinions before and after the Museum's amendments.
Firstly, It's crystal clear that visitors are really contented with the changes made to the museum.
Where the percentage of people who said they are very satisfied increased to 35% in the last year compared to 15% only in the first visit. In the same manner, the percentage of people who said they are satisfied after the modification raised to 40 visitors instead of 30 in the previous year.
On the other hand, visitors who said they are dissatisfied and very dissatisfied decreased from 40 and 10 before refurbishment to 15 and 5 after refurbishment respectively.
Finally, those who didn't express their opinion remained the same (5 visitors) before and after the change.
To sum up. there was an incredible change in the results of surveys of visitors to Ashdown Museum. After the renovation of the museum, visitors became highly pleased and satisfied.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, similarly, so, still, third, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58100558659 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12541748405 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569832402235 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0295415434 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305312766229 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127285196415 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797240046376 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203818569082 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872161017804 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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