Television Good or Bad
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about television and if it should be
viewed as a positive or negative impact to society. While it is possible to claim that television
provides a source of entertainment to people, my view is that the disadvantages outweigh the
advantages. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analysing both sides of the
argument.
There are several reasons why Television is considered to be disadvantageous to society. One of
them is that viewing of television can be a source of distraction in our life, turning away our
focus from the more important things in life. It can also be argued that we tend to waste hours
in front of the television instead of working on our goals and ambitions in life. It should also be
taken into account that children at a young age spending too much time in front of the
television. For example, some people spend all of their free time in front of the television instead
of working on productive activities.
Those who argue for television have a different view and say that it can actually be a good
thing. Firstly, it is claimed that Television can be a good source of information to learn new
things if used correctly. Then, there are concerns about people not viewing television to be
unaware of current events and latest news around the world.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that
television usage is best avoided or minimized as we should focus on other productive tasks
instead. I would strongly recommend that people view how much time they currently spend on
watching television and see how this time can be put to better use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80338983051 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70013139795 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6067052999 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.0 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.12807881773 460% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.33497536946 300% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20699669674 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881265598677 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580034875788 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698179405829 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688794066836 0.0609392437508 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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