An accident

Essay topics:

An accident

Dir sir.

I hope this letter finds you in good health. My name is Rivan, and I had the great chance to deal with your valuable company.

However, I have rented a car from your head office which is located at Malaysia international airport for two weeks. The car model is B.M.W, white colour, and carrying plate number (H 25410 ).

Unfortunately, I had an accident yesterday midnight when I was driving the car into my apartment. Breafelly, a massive truck smashed my vehicle from behind due to max speed and not keeping a safe distance between both of our cars.

Therefore, I had to contact the police station to file an accident report as it is usually followed. Additionally, I phoned the insurance company, customer service office, and requested to send me a recovery truck to pull-up my damaged car, and the response was positively cooperative.

At last, I would like to ask you for sending me another car to replace the damaged one, as our leasing contract gives me such option in case of accidents.

Thank you,
yours sincerely.
Rivan

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: W
...rt for two weeks. The car model is B.M.W, white colour, and carrying plate numbe...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...olour, and carrying plate number H 25410 . Unfortunately, I had an accident yes...
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Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...safe distance between both of our cars. Therefore, I had to contact the police s...
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Line 13, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion in case of accidents. Thank you, yours sincerely. Rivan
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85082872928 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70349771432 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707182320442 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8158236565 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138199297734 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553016962751 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117460918303 0.0603063233224 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717058487585 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878259770773 0.0580467560999 151% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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