To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
The statement linking urban life with cultural understanding plays on recent human experience over the few decades. The prompt assumes that cities are hubs of social, economic, and political frenzy that display cultural diversity and polarization conspicuously. In San Francisco, one cannot walk down a street without passing an ethnic restaurant in one of its ethnically polarizes boroughs, which shows its liberally diverse culture. In contrast, New York's boroughs tell a harsh story of income inequality and economic dissatisfaction. In fact, all throughout the world major cities display the most accurate record of a country's culture.
This assumes that smaller cities do not have a large enough sample population to accurately describe the features of a culture. One could argue that the less-populated Midwest cities, which are mostly conservative farming communities, do not accurately portray the whole of the United State's political culture. In contrast, the bustling cities of Austin and Ann Arbor have a reasonable mix of people that more or less reflect the actual political ideologies present in mainstream culture. On the other hand, some would argue that a city cannot capture the polarized, culturally outlying factions. But when considering the root of all social, economic, political, and intellectual output from a society, much of urban runoff influences rural life just as much as rural communities affect urban cities. This makes the issue obsolete.
Consider how rural communities sustain the economic viability of cities. Agriculture feeds the city populous and the city populous returns technology, imports, and development funding. City population has grown in recent years, and the demand for food production and manufacturing from rural communities increased. Increasingly, there has become a larger demand on wholesale, local goods. As the demand continues to rise, the effect of the rural population becomes ever more apparent in the local urban economy and food culture. As the rural population largely supports urban life, the rural sub-culture also marks the urban economy and culture.
It is the necessity of modern life that makes developed cities a better meter of a country's culture than rural communities. Cities often develop new technologies, regulations, and agricultural policies that directly affect those communities. The new pathway leaves room for exchange of cultural imports from smaller communities. Especially with the rise in technology such as the internet, opinions, food recipes, political ideology, and information have never been able to be shared faster between communities. Urban and rural centers are not as separated as they were centuries or even millennia ago when people had to carry their art and wares from small villages miles to reach city centers. The modern way of life has connected rural and urban communities in such a way to make urban life a diverse and accurate representation of any national culture.
Urban cities will always remain an emblem of national identity, combining social, economic, and political perspectives via technological networking. Given the trend from past centuries and millennia, it appears that cities will continue to urbanize and homogenize as technology increases the ability to share cultural perspectives.
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- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate 79
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 75
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate 66
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. 70
- ISSUE ESSAY: As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 544, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nequality and economic dissatisfaction. In fact, all throughout the world major ci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in contrast, in fact, such as, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2830.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 511.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53816046967 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9155005765 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 215.323595506 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536203522505 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 924.3 704.065955056 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.636791423 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.2 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.44 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.24 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0791899114634 0.243740707755 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0215480130325 0.0831039109588 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382546775941 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0458112982573 0.150359130593 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487607991041 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 48.8420337079 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 12.1743820225 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 152.0 100.480337079 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.