Some people say that in our modern age it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of hand writing. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Human being is pampered in the lap of technology. Presently, significance of advance age is gaining ground among the society. Therefore, it keeping handwriting at the back seat. I strongly discord with the given statement that need of handwriting skill is desperately required.
To begin with, presence of essential skills of inscription plays a phenomenal role to fulfill the requirement of all level. To be specific, having writing knowledge allows people to express their instinctive expression in a better way . It creates a long lasting impact on readers mind. Many prominent writers like Shakespeare, Williams john insisted people to read their articals with the power of writing as they used proper pharases, formation, linkers, slangs, abbreviations and so on. Consequently, knowledge of writing skill opens the door of optimum opportunity for juveniles.
Secondly, pen is considered the main weapon in this cut throat competition era. Thus, availability of writing skills surrounds offsprings with confidence to face any hurdle of life. Eventually, the role of writing in the field of towering success is beyond comparison. Furthermore, proficiency in writing nourish adolescents with enormous job options like writer, news editer, language lecture etc as well as surplus outlay.
However, use of technology is progressing by leaps and bounds. Thence, children are very much fond of computer, typing machine, and other modern gadgets and knowledge of writing skills is no longer of that importance. Moreover, children use cut short language while connecting on mobiles. Hence, popularity of writing is at the low ebb.
To conclude, writing skill is very essential for getting success in job sectors and achieving strength.
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flaws:
need some relative clauses and adverbial clauses.
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The length of sentences should be moderate. It can't be too long or too short. you don't have issues on sentence length.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 266 350
No. of Characters: 1420 1500
No. of Different Words: 176 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.039 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.338 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.889 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 120 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.778 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.94 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.279 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.527 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.025 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Human being is pampered in the lap of technology. Presently, si...
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...ed in the lap of technology. Presently, significance of advance age is gaining g...
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...ing ground among the society. Therefore, it keeping handwriting at the back seat...
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...iety. Therefore, it keeping handwriting at the back seat. I strongly discord wi...
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...ng at the back seat. I strongly discord with the given statement that need of ha...
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...desperately required. To begin with, presence of essential skills of inscript...
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...sence of essential skills of inscription plays a phenomenal role to fulfill the r...
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...equirement of all level. To be specific, having writing knowledge allows people t...
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...r instinctive expression in a better way . It creates a long lasting impact on rea...
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...ll opens the door of optimum opportunity for juveniles. Secondly, pen is con...
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...pportunity for juveniles. Secondly, pen is considered the main weapon in thi...
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...oat competition era. Thus, availability of writing skills surrounds offsprings ...
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...to face any hurdle of life. Eventually, the role of writing in the field of towe...
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... the field of towering success is beyond comparison. Furthermore, proficiency in...
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...cess is beyond comparison. Furthermore, proficiency in writing nourish adolescen...
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...s with enormous job options like writer, news editer, language lecture etc as we...
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...s job options like writer, news editer, language lecture etc as well as surplus ...
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... as well as surplus outlay. However, use of technology is progressing by le...
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... outlay. However, use of technology is progressing by leaps and bounds. The...
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...ever, use of technology is progressing by leaps and bounds. Thence, children ...
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...rogressing by leaps and bounds. Thence, children are very much fond of computer...
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...uage while connecting on mobiles. Hence, popularity of writing is at the low ebb....
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...ing success in job sectors and achieving strength.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55263157895 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00594873744 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669172932331 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2847490237 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0555555556 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7777777778 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0809964225645 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0227264653381 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0242760747669 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0444828408683 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198179664063 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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