you recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. you phoned the shop but no action was taken.
Write a letter to the shop manager.In your letter
1. Describe the problem with the equipment
2. Explain what happened when you phoned the shop
3 say what you would like the manager to do
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction caused by equipment, I bought from your circuit house store. I am one of the loyal customer of your company.
I had bought washing machine from your store and after only 2 days it started making abnormal noises in addition to it some electric current is also felt at the time of touching the panel. Morover, machine is in very bad shape to use.
After above fault with machine, I called store to send mechanic and check what went wrong, Instead of sending mechanic your shop manager hunged phone and after making multiple calls, he asked us to send back machine to store by ourself only. I would like you to take serious action against shop manager and also bring back this faulty equipment with fresh replacement as early as possible.
Your prompt action shall be highly appreciated.
Thanking you
Anand Dixit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the loyal customer of your company. I had bought washing machine from your st...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r only 2 days it started making abnormal noises in addition to it some electric c...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39827425958 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686274509804 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.4563630592 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210089756278 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829425876482 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448640469311 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101075432571 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459382384753 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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