Region affects people...
Accomplishments depends on many factors but the important factors are determination, confidence, hard work and positivity. Luck and place plays its role if the main factors are applied accurately. If the factors are applied positively, the results will be the same. However, some people argue that a native place of a person plays a vital role in ones success. This essay will clarify why place plays only a part in success of a person but not as whole factor.
To begin with, if we look back in history we would find out that most of the innovators and discoverers hardly received any help from their neighbourhood. There is hardly and citation in any reference that leads us to understand whether their native place did help them to accomplish what they were set for. From Newton to Steve jobs, everyone was successful only because of hard work, true determination and a passion to do something different.
On the other hand, people who believe in the factors like luck and omen still argue that regions and surroundings plays important role in ones life. However, they forget the fact that native place is always the start for everyone of us, but later we move on from that place to grow more. This doesn't means everything that is achieved by us is just due to the native surroundings.
To rest my pen, native place and surroundings gives us the initial platform but in order to move on we need to step up and go. Native regions surely plays a role in every ones life but the role is one of the factors. But, not the true one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, still, in fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 273.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63736263736 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58897927181 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545787545788 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8984403188 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4285714286 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0304887432142 0.242375264174 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0114562518948 0.0925447433944 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280980470529 0.071462118173 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0237003958772 0.151781067708 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023785534829 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.5310837438 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.32886699507 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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