The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the figure provided the percentage of men and women who kept in fit in the Australia according to the six different age groups in 2010.
There was a minor differences between the percentage of men and women who did regular exercise in the age over 65, from 46.7% to 47.1%. With regards to others, we observed significant differences in 35 to 44 age group from 39.5% to 52.5% and in 45 to 54 age group from 43.1% to 53.3%.
Meanwhile, women from 45 to 54 had the most percentage among all at 53.3%. In the case of males, group from 15 to 24 with 52.8% accounted for the highest figure.
To sum up, the bar chart indicate clearly that in all of six groups, the percentage of men who did regular physical activity was less than the percentage of women.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of males, group from 15 to 24 with 52.8% accounted for the highest figure. To ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 628.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39160839161 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47004648531 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 181.8 283.868780488 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1645727982 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312339615616 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158748203513 0.103423049105 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984624520816 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19939461587 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851160859966 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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