In an attempt to improve highway safety, Prunty County last year lowered its speed limit from 55 to 45 miles per hour on all county highways. But this effort has failed: the number of accidents has not decreased, and, based on reports by the highway patrol, many drivers are exceeding the speed limit. Prunty County should instead undertake the same kind of road improvement project that Butler County completed five years ago: increasing lane widths, resurfacing rough highways, and improving visibility at dangerous intersections. Today, major Butler County roads still have a 55 mph speed limit, yet there were 25 percent fewer reported accidents in Butler County this past year than there were five years ago.
The argument has been flawed for numerous reasons. primarily, the argument claims that punty county is similar to that of bunty county and believing that they can reduce accident count by implementing similar road precautions. Rendering its main conclusion that Bunty county has fewer accident reports compared to five years ago.
The argument fails to provide any justification that punty county has a population similar to bunty county , and also punty county highways might be located on an unsafe location like in between mountains such as ghat roads,bunty county might have a lesser population and straight high ways which might report them few accidents.
The Bunty county implemented precautions and corrections of road five years ago, on present-day this might not suffice to punty county highways because in the conclusion it claims that only 20% has been declined from last year,the population might be low in Bunty county .so it might require advanced monitoring of roadways like toll gates ,high way patrolling, speed guns, etc. Nonetheless anyways implementing road safety precautions and extending highways from 2-way to 4-way or 6-way and making it more spacious for driving free and can safe even on high speeds and constructing speed breakers in danger zones which can reduce to a small extent.
In Conclusion, Because the Argument makes several unwarranted assumptions.it fails
to make a convincing case that implementing techniques which was implemented five years ago by buntycounty ,puntycounty can reduce the accidents, invalid.
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Comments
e-rater score report
No. of Words: 243 350
Minimum 250 words wanted
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 11 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 243 350
No. of Characters: 1287 1500
No. of Different Words: 139 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.948 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.296 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.772 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 92 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 68 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 40.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 20.197 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.524 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.812 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.203 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Primarily
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Suggestion: ,
...has a population similar to bunty county , and also punty county highways might be...
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Suggestion: , bunty
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the conclusion it claims that only 20% has been declined from last year,the pop...
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Suggestion: , the
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... population might be low in Bunty county .so it might require advanced monitoring...
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Suggestion:
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...d monitoring of roadways like toll gates ,high way patrolling, speed guns, etc. No...
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Suggestion: ,
...mplemented five years ago by buntycounty ,puntycounty can reduce the accidents, in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, if, nonetheless, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.6327345309 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 55.5748502994 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 2260.96107784 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 241.0 441.139720559 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49377593361 5.12650576532 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.56307096286 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85743726956 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 204.123752495 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580912863071 0.468620217663 124% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 705.55239521 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.8473053892 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.292930926 57.8364921388 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 189.142857143 119.503703932 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4285714286 23.324526521 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.70786347227 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222749325344 0.218282227539 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103843656565 0.0743258471296 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608111829612 0.0701772020484 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112343881538 0.128457276422 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639744777985 0.0628817314937 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 14.3799401198 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 48.3550499002 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.197005988 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.5979740519 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.32208582834 114% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 98.500998004 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.1389221557 140% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.9071856287 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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