The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people whom they lead

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The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people whom they lead.

Many leaders to date on planet earth, even the democratic countries leaders have muted the people for their heinous scams and for their sake of selfish needs.
Leaders who discuss with people closely were likely to understand the problems of the common people, but it was a very rare situation to happen because different people have different ideologies and they may express different feedback which might discourage the leaders who serve the society.
Suppose we know ms dhoni a cricket leader who lead the Indian team during the ICC world cup2011, he never took feedback from the people to get in the ground to bat at an early stage, he just surprised all of us just after losing 2 wickets he came in and performed excellently and conquered us the cup. so we might face some situations where we have no time to take feedback, leaders must be strong enough to make quick decisions in a short span, also similarly it applies to the military.
detouring from the example, when India is fighting against the covid19 virus, many poor people have suffered lack of food, shelter and many cannot cross the borders across the state due to lack of transportations, then an actor named Sonu Sood who helped thousands of people with his beautiful heart, no political leader in the country have reached out the people and asked us what we wanted, he took the feedback and made us feel safe and happy during such pandemic situation, he is one of the best leader India has seen.
Atal Bihari Vajpayee who served India relentlessly without any attitude towards common people he took feedback from people and implemented many schemes which were today we are living with the help of them.
So the best leaders are obviously who encourage feedback from the people who they lead I almost agree with the statement, and a Leader is one who should take a proper decision within time to serve the people whom they lead, so if we are under a critical situation the leader should not depend on feedback he should protect us with his decision at such situation. There were many leaders who took responsibility and lead the people successfully without any feedback from them.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...d excellently and conquered us the cup. so we might face some situations where we ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Detouring
... similarly it applies to the military. detouring from the example, when India is fightin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, similarly, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 373.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78016085791 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42711907412 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538873994638 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.0359550562 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.562484193 60.3974514979 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.875 118.986275619 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.625 23.4991977007 198% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431826124662 0.243740707755 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206913510604 0.0831039109588 249% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123544194374 0.0758088955206 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223151277843 0.150359130593 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14218817426 0.0667264976115 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.4 14.1392134831 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.25 48.8420337079 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.1743820225 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.8971910112 147% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.2143820225 182% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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