The author claimed that by reducing the number rental mopeds the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians can be reduced. He based his claim on the similar enforcement by the neighboring island however he should have provided some more substantial evidences to bolster his claim.
He stated the population increase to 100000 during summer time he but did not make use of this data anywhere. He should have provided the log of the town council about the accidents during summer time and normal time. Based on this log we can get whether reducing the number of rental mopeds will cause any effect on the number of accidents or not.
He also claimed that by reducing the rented mopeds from 50 to 25 will attain 50% the annual reduction in the moped accidents and he based his claim on the last year’s data the neighboring island. First of all the data from the neighboring island is annual data, the data of the summer season should be calculated separately that will give the clear understanding of the accidents reduced during summer time by imposing the limits. The neighboring island on the other hand does not necessarily have same traffic and road conditions it could be worse and better then Balmer Island also the population increase during summer time could also be different.
Instead of the limiting the number of rented mopeds the town council should focus on more strict traffic rules this will reduce the number of accidents as well as beneficial for the economy. To validate his claim author should have provided the answers to the following questions.
i) Are the traffic and road conditions for both the island same?
ii) Are the amount of population increase is same for both the island during the summer time?
iii) If answer to both the above mentioned questions is yes then what is the reduction in the number of accidents during summer time not annual in the island of Seaville.
If answer to first two questions is affirmative and the number of accidents have also reduced in good amount during summer time, authors claim can be validated and the limit can enforced on moped rentals of Balmer Island.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 363 350
No. of Characters: 1740 1500
No. of Different Words: 143 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.365 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.793 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.404 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 139 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 71 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 33 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.013 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.727 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.465 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.65 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.23 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 52, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...he population increase to 100000 during summer time he but did not make use of this data an...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 110, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...did not make use of this data anywhere. He should have provided the log of the tow...
^^
Line 2, column 189, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...town council about the accidents during summer time and normal time. Based on this log we c...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 280, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...ring island is annual data, the data of the summer season should be calculated separately that wi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 401, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...tanding of the accidents reduced during summer time by imposing the limits. The neighboring...
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Line 4, column 509, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'trafficked'.
Suggestion: trafficked
...her hand does not necessarily have same traffic and road conditions it could be worse a...
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Line 4, column 559, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'better than'?
Suggestion: better than
...d road conditions it could be worse and better then Balmer Island also the population incre...
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Line 4, column 566, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...conditions it could be worse and better then Balmer Island also the population incre...
^^^^
Line 4, column 621, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...and also the population increase during summer time could also be different. Instead of ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...he answers to the following questions. i Are the traffic and road conditions for...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...he answers to the following questions. i Are the traffic and road conditions for...
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Line 7, column 3, Rule ID: PERS_PRONOUN_AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: Did you mean 'am' or 'ate'?
Suggestion: Am; Ate
... answers to the following questions. i Are the traffic and road conditions for bot...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ii
...d conditions for both the island same? ii Are the amount of population increase i...
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Line 8, column 81, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
... is same for both the island during the summer time? iii If answer to both the above menti...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Iii
...oth the island during the summer time? iii If answer to both the above mentioned q...
^^^
Line 9, column 121, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...ction in the number of accidents during summer time not annual in the island of Seaville. ...
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Line 11, column 117, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...have also reduced in good amount during summer time, authors claim can be validated and the...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, well, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 55.5748502994 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 2260.96107784 79% => OK
No of words: 366.0 441.139720559 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8825136612 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46248692555 2.78398813304 88% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 204.123752495 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.407103825137 0.468620217663 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 705.55239521 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.696235569 57.8364921388 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.642857143 119.503703932 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 23.324526521 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.70786347227 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 5.15768463074 155% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.25449101796 324% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359732930053 0.218282227539 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145601232429 0.0743258471296 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064837058496 0.0701772020484 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184915483872 0.128457276422 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527724097146 0.0628817314937 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.3799401198 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.3550499002 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 98.500998004 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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