There is a huge difference between me and my parent’s way of life. This is because of the generation gap of around 30 years. On one side I spend a fast paced and hectic life they prefer to keep their life simple and easy. It is ones choice how someone wants to spend their life but I think that the way my parents live is the write approach towards life.
My parents belong to a generation which has spent their life with not having much of the amenities. Because of this they have value for small things in life and do not long for things that are not essential for living. They did not had television, Mobile phones so the only method of communication was face to face chat with people because of this they have so strong and valuable relationships. They live a social and selfless life. On contrary my life has been full of amenities. I have all the things that my parents did not have. To match with fast paced world I have to be that much fast because of that I spend most of the time with mobile phones and computers instead of spending time with family and friends. My way of life is more self centered and unsocial.
My parents are very conscious towards their health and discipline. They go for a morning walk daily and do yoga after that. They have schedule for every day and they follow it diligently. On contrary unfortunately I am not so conscious towards my health also I am not so good with schedule. These are the things I would like to learn from my parents.
My parent’s lifestyle is more satisfying and happy. I am also satisfied with my lifestyle but I would like control my desires may be that will add some rest to my life. I would suggest future generation to have a balance between health, wealth and family as my parents have done for their whole life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... keep their life simple and easy. It is ones choice how someone wants to spend their...
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Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...I think that the way my parents live is the write approach towards life. My parents be...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... not essential for living. They did not had television, Mobile phones so the only m...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for everyday'?
Suggestion: for everyday
... do yoga after that. They have schedule for every day and they follow it diligently. On contr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4186746988 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43835858959 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463855421687 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6963727439 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.35 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55 5.45110844103 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236011323245 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856612852832 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650387604948 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155814976631 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642896017955 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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