Internet has been a biggest revolution of our time. It has made an enormous amount of information available to everyone by just a single click. This easy availability of information has influenced life in various ways. It has saved a lot of time and efforts as earlier we need to look for other sources like books. It has connected us to the world at a level which has never been achieved before. However there have been downsides of internet as well.
Social networking sites like Facebook & Twitter have given us a platform that we can express something to the whole world just sitting at home. The information which used to take days to send through letters can be sent in second using email. Search engine like Google has a huge amount of data available for everyone. Unfortunately people sometimes misuse so valuable facility, a game like Blue Whale become cause of suicide of many young children. Social media which should be used to share valuable information some people use it to spread hate. The information at internet is so easily available that sometimes it goes into wrong hands like a child can have access to pornographic sites, A terrorist can learn how to make bomb using internet.
In order to conclude, Easy availability of information has influenced every aspect of life in good ways and bad ways. It is a valuable tool we should make best use of it instead of misusing it.
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- The widespread use of the Internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in the availability of information influence life in today's world?Use specific reasons and examples to support your opin 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
Internet has been a biggest revolution of our time. It has ...
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Line 1, column 398, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...l which has never been achieved before. However there have been downsides of internet a...
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'make the best'.
Suggestion: make the best
...d ways. It is a valuable tool we should make best use of it instead of misusing it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 243.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7695473251 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6506573295 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588477366255 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.161327825 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7857142857 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.45110844103 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292074999377 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954404327084 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711897061679 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185541614546 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270829685646 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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