In conclusion,vaccines are developed by scientist to improve the quality of lives and it will be foolhardy for any one to stop the use of such live preserving medicines.I will like to add that in using the vaccines, expirey dates are checked properly and medicine are stored in ideal conditions-stored in freezers,used up fully once open- to ensure their potency is intact and thus can perform as expected. If all these are put in place, theres no reason why innoculations shoul Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
Disease causing bacteria is the bane of man and for man to be free to live, thrive and achieve his full potential there is need to tackle all forms of threat to his health. While cow flu is deadly and highly contagious, medical science has advanced greatly and a vaccine to prevent this deadly disease has been developed. However it is suggested by the writer that the vaccine may cause death. How can this be suggested? What are the basis of this view point?
Firstly, it is interesting to note that before any vaccine is used on any human, it would have gone through series of research, testing,analysis and received approval from requisite authorities. How then did a supposedly deadly vaccine get approval?
If indeed the cow pox vaccine is deadly, how many deaths have been recorded? Out of the the number recorded, how many had autopsies actually performed to authenticate the claim that the cause of death was the cow pox vaccine?
Could the deaths be merely coincidental? Perhaps at the time of administration, there was another underlying ailment which was undetected. Without concrete information about the health status of victims it is difficult if not impossible to ascribe the cause of death to the cow pox vaccine.
In addition, the dosage of the vaccine needs to be queried? Were victims given the correct dosages in a timely mannaner for it to act as a preventive? If the victims had already developed the disease before the administration of the vaccine, then that will be counter productive. In which case, the victim died out of an infection and not due to the administered dose.
In conclusion,vaccines are developed by scientist to improve the quality of lives and it will be foolhardy for any one to stop the use of such live preserving medicines.I will like to add that in using the vaccines, expirey dates are checked properly and medicine are stored in ideal conditions-stored in freezers,used up fully once open- to ensure their potency is intact and thus can perform as expected. If all these are put in place, theres no reason why innoculations should be prevented.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 361 350
No. of Characters: 1697 1500
No. of Different Words: 199 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.359 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.701 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.66 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 123 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 53 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.056 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.789 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.611 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.28 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.569 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.052 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...this deadly disease has been developed. However it is suggested by the writer that the ...
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Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , analysis
...gone through series of research, testing,analysis and received approval from requisite au...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 85, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... many deaths have been recorded? Out of the the number recorded, how many had autopsies...
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Line 9, column 85, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... many deaths have been recorded? Out of the the number recorded, how many had autopsies...
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Line 21, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , vaccines
...he administered dose. In conclusion,vaccines are developed by scientist to improve t...
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Line 21, column 112, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...y of lives and it will be foolhardy for any one to stop the use of such live preserving...
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Line 21, column 170, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...e use of such live preserving medicines.I will like to add that in using the vacc...
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Line 21, column 172, Rule ID: WILL_LIKE_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'would'?
Suggestion: would
...use of such live preserving medicines.I will like to add that in using the vaccines,...
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Line 21, column 314, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , used
...d in ideal conditions-stored in freezers,used up fully once open- to ensure their pot...
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Line 21, column 439, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...xpected. If all these are put in place, theres no reason why innoculations should be p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, then, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 28.8173652695 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 55.5748502994 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 2260.96107784 78% => OK
No of words: 357.0 441.139720559 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94677871148 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94887614271 2.78398813304 106% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 204.123752495 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.468620217663 122% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 705.55239521 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 85.0234535544 57.8364921388 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1111111111 119.503703932 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 23.324526521 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.70786347227 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342648667017 0.218282227539 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072278348229 0.0743258471296 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148685501015 0.0701772020484 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151875643665 0.128457276422 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.202685924481 0.0628817314937 322% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.3799401198 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.5979740519 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 98.500998004 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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