People most respect the powerful not when they exercise their power, but when they refrain from exercising it.”
Write an essay in which you develop and support a position on the statement above. In writing your essay, you should consider both when the statement may be true and when it may be false.
Respect is the act of holding a person, post or institution in high esteem or with deference while a power is the ability to carry out a set of activities restricted from the general in a particular setting. Some would argue that people most respect the powerful when the refrain from exercising power, but others would argue that people actually respect the powerful when they wield and exercise such power. Respect actually goes hand in hand with fear.
Consider, the case of the government of Nigeria. The populace respect an average police man because of the way. Many parents wish their sons should join the police force as a result of this. when the rate of cybercrime increased in at the coming of the 21st century. The government proposed the new cybercrime bill and it was passed into law. Suprisingly, the rate of cybercrime witnessed a mild increase, as more people became aware of this, no thanks to the pervasive messages of entertainers that wrote sons about it. But with the actual and rather tough enforcement of these law by the policemen, that the government witnessed a decrease in the crime. This was also catalysed by the frequent coverage of arrests by the state owned National Television Authority (NTA).
Let also look at the story of Moses in the bible, Isrealites, albeit not all of them respects him as a prophet. Still, there was a very large fraction of unbelievers amongst them regardless of the various miracles he performed which they witnessed. It was not until they were afflicted by the epidemic that almost ruined their cities that they turned towards God in repentance as told in both the Holy Quran and Bible.
The people that argue that people most respect the powerful when the refrain from exercising power might cite as example the case of parents warning their children several times before punishing them which still causes change in the said children But the fear of the consequences is actually the cause of the childs turn not her silent responses to bad acts carried out by the child.
In conclusion, as evidenced in the case of the Nigerian fight against cyber crime and the story of Isrealites in the bible. In both cases, they had tacit respects of their the former, the policemen and the latter, God. People actually respect the powerful not only by wielding their power but buy exercising such powers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'respects'.
Suggestion: respects
...the government of Nigeria. The populace respect an average police man because of the wa...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...n the police force as a result of this. when the rate of cybercrime increased in at ...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n the police force as a result of this. when the rate of cybercrime increased in at ...
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Line 3, column 574, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this law' or 'these laws'?
Suggestion: this law; these laws
... actual and rather tough enforcement of these law by the policemen, that the government w...
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Line 9, column 294, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
...ul not only by wielding their power but buy exercising such powers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, look, so, still, while, as to, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 404.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85891089109 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49904770609 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529702970297 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.7383431776 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.055555556 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313876616718 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784470859399 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995410134366 0.0758088955206 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172306460212 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841765914203 0.0667264976115 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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