All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with these statements and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statements might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Consultancy is the seeking of advice or opinions from a particular person or body based on their experience or knowledge. Some people argue that consultancy would be unnecessary if companies spend more time listening to their own employess, but others would state that external consultancy is a necessary ingredient for growth and development of a company. After weighing all evidences, it is clear that external consultancy is well very important for company efficient operation. External people in most situations see very differently from people in a situation.
Consider for example, the case of a school such as a college or university and the setting up the Parent Teacher Association called the (PTA). The employees in a institution of learning are teachers who have been renowned as one of the smartest profession. The population of teachers in the school should have enough source for consultation for its effective running based on their insight and knowledge, yet the school still set up a PTA made of external people, the parents, in order to help in providing advices and views on how the school can be ran more efficiently. The teacher doesnt know the best time a particular student assimilates or the reason a sparticular child is always grumpy in school.
Like the case of the PTA, lets examine a football match and also one of the reasons for substitution. There have been several situations were substitutes have been called 'game changers' because they come into the game and made their impact known. These players had it easy for them becaiuse they have studied the game for a period of time from the sidelines and observed point of weakness of the opposition, things that his fellow teammates cant notice because their minds have been preoccupied and fatigued with the actual pressure of the game to actually think of innovative and alternate solutions to winning the game, coupled with advices of the technical staff, the substitute is very specific and focused on what to do once he comes on.
Those that argue that consultancy would be unnecessary if companies spend more time listening to their own employees may cite the probable point that those outside the system might not know the intricacies and indepth analysis of the situation at hand that will make them abreast enough to profer effective solutions or advices and that only the people in the system can have this incisive knowledge. But if enough information is present in forms of data and figures, or whatever required form and the external consultants are experienced in this particular field, worse still the people in the system might actually be blind to some alternative solutions because they have been focused on one particular path maybe based on their experience. A pair or pairs of fresh unclouded eyes would be better off at seeing clearly as evidenced in the case of substitutes and the PTA.
In conclusion, based on the cases of the PTA in the school and the various impactful substitutes in football matches, it is evident that outside consultancy is very much necessary if a company is to operate efficiently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2606.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 518.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03088803089 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78854839418 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478764478764 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 828.9 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.206417139 60.3974514979 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.733333333 118.986275619 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5333333333 23.4991977007 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254191588974 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885463171704 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948515964668 0.0758088955206 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15397375674 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829932380808 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 14.1392134831 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.