The following is part of a memorandum from the president of Humana University.
"Last year the number of students who enrolled in online degree programs offered by nearby Omni University increased by 50 percent. During the same year, Omni showed a significant decrease from prior years in expenditures for dormitory and classroom space, most likely because instruction in the online programs takes place via the Internet. In contrast, over the past three years, enrolment at Humana University has failed to grow, and the cost of maintaining buildings has increased along with our budget deficit. To address these problems, Humana University will begin immediately to create and actively promote online degree programs like those at Omni. We predict that instituting these online degree programs will help Humana both increase its total enrollment and solve its budget problems."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the prediction and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the prediction.
As Humana University failed to grow from past three years and cost of maintaining buildings has increased along with the budget increase. To solve this problem Humana University will start giving online degree program like those at Omni University. Providing evidence that by doing so Omni University show decrees in their expenditures and number of admission has also increased by 50 percent. However, president of Humana University has not considered aspect and before making this decision some question must be answer.
Firstly, what is the rank of Humana University compare to Omni University? Maybe rank of the Omni University is higher than Humana University so more and more people are taking admissions in Omni University. So it may be nothing to do with online degree course. For instance, if a person is coming from other country than it is blatant that he/she will go for higher ranking universities first. If this is true, than number of people enrolling for degree this year may be less than previous year.
Secondly, where does most of the student of Humana University Live? Or what is the financial background of the students studying in Humana University? Maybe most of the student from Humana University is bucolic. Maybe they don’t have internet access at their home. Or maybe their financial condition is not so strong to buy high speed internet. For example, if there is the student in this university who live in rural area or other country where getting internet access is there, than is such cases he will not able to attend all lectures or perceive his online degree. If this happens to be true then, he/she will not recommend others to take admission in this university.
In conclusion, before starting online degree course this question must be answered. President of Humana University should provide more evidence to strengthen his points.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 311 350
No. of Characters: 1526 1500
No. of Different Words: 162 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.199 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.907 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.532 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 119 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.278 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.422 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.361 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.53 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.148 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...ng universities first. If this is true, than number of people enrolling for degree t...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore evidence to strengthen his points.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 28.8173652695 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 55.5748502994 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 2260.96107784 70% => OK
No of words: 308.0 441.139720559 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13311688312 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60553111216 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 204.123752495 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519480519481 0.468620217663 111% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 705.55239521 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.70958083832 295% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2701129417 57.8364921388 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8333333333 119.503703932 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 23.324526521 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.70786347227 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.67664670659 235% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348201895439 0.218282227539 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121555744529 0.0743258471296 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07849866858 0.0701772020484 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223346380955 0.128457276422 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094085887926 0.0628817314937 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.3799401198 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.3550499002 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 98.500998004 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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