The argument is flawed in many areas, firstly the argument is based on the complete point of banning the cell phone use in order to reduce the side walk rage in their city but didn't say anything about the path on which the people walk is big enough to accommodate a big crowd. maybe over the past three years the population of the city is grown significantly and footpaths size remain same due to which there is a frequent assaults, property damage and disruptions of normal pedestrian traffic.
Let us assume that the sidewalk but still there is confusion on whether the ban is imposed across the whole city or only in the areas where there is high disruptions in pedestrian traffic flow is not mentioned in the argument. another assumption made by the argument without any justification is that the Middletown on passing the ban on mobile use their reported incidents of sidewalk crime has gone significantly but didn't mention anything about the number of cell phone users in that city.
Maybe in Middletown there are many cell phone users when compared to Centerville and are frequently using their phones on sidewalks to put a check on this issue they might have imposed the ban but what about the number of cell phone users in Centerville are they in similar number compared to middle town the argument assumes to do so Is the use cell phones on the footpaths is the only reason for increase in sidewalk accidents maybe the people are preoccupied with their tension and are in a hurry due to which there might be more accidents The argument is failing to take into consideration all the above stated things and so we cannot assume that imposing the ban on cell phone use will reduce the incidents of sidewalk crime
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 4 15
No. of Words: 305 350
No. of Characters: 1409 1500
No. of Different Words: 146 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.179 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.62 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.521 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 85 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 62 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 76.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 20.437 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.624 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.624 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.327 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ce the side walk rage in their city but didnt say anything about the path on which th...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 278, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Maybe
... big enough to accommodate a big crowd. maybe over the past three years the populatio...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 424, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'assault'?
Suggestion: assault
...n same due to which there is a frequent assaults, property damage and disruptions of nor...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 723, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Another
... flow is not mentioned in the argument. another assumption made by the argument without...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 915, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...dewalk crime has gone significantly but didnt mention anything about the number of ce...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 28.8173652695 45% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 2260.96107784 63% => OK
No of words: 303.0 441.139720559 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6699669967 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52707889107 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 204.123752495 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481848184818 0.468620217663 103% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 705.55239521 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 19.7664670659 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 22.8473053892 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 194.490719573 57.8364921388 336% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 283.0 119.503703932 237% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.6 23.324526521 260% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.70786347227 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 5.15768463074 19% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.20758483034 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114062143452 0.218282227539 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657672502019 0.0743258471296 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291887360828 0.0701772020484 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114062143452 0.128457276422 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.9 14.3799401198 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.04 48.3550499002 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 12.197005988 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.5979740519 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.32208582834 113% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 98.500998004 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.0 11.1389221557 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.9071856287 218% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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