The Gordon Act, which established a wildlife refuge in the Big Dark Swamp, is currently up for reauthorization. The act prohibits the building of roads or cutting of old growth trees in the swamp, though it permits hunting. Many blamed logging activities for the decline of the bird population, especially that of the dappled grackle. The grackle population has continued to decline since the passage of the law, demonstrating that the Gordon Act has not been sufficient to protect the species. Another nearby refuge, the Wayne County Marsh Habitat, bans all mining, logging, and hunting. Wayne County officials have not reported a decline in the grackle population there. This proves that hunting, not logging, was responsible for the population drop in Broomall County. Thus, Broomall County should not reauthorize the Gordon Act unless it is amended to include the same provisions as those in Wayne County.
In this editorial, the author concludes that the Broomall country should not reauthorize the Gordon acts unless it is amended to include the provisions as those in Wayne Country to reduce the population drop of dappled grackle.
To support this conclusion the author points out that hunting was responsible for that population reduction and not logging. The editorial also cities that Wayne country has banned all mining,logging,and hunting and there no was not single issues regarding the decline of the bird population.In several respects, However the evidence lends little credible support for the argument.
First of all the fact that, logging activities has resulted in the decline of the bird population lends little support.The decline in the population could be due to sever climatic conditions the birds might have migrated to other places.Lacking clear evidence about the decline in birds population the author cannot expect us to take the claim seriously.
Similarly the fact that Gordon Act has not been sufficient to protest against the decline of birds lends little support.As stated earlier the decline of birds may be due to sever climatic conditions of the country also there is no clear evidence that logging was the only primary reason for the decline of birds.
Moreover the author asserts that in Wayne country there is no problems regarding the decline of populations the editorial asserts that the country has banned logging,mining and hunting.The author provides no clear evidence about the population of the birds and also about their immunity as such, the birds in Wayne country could be more prone to the living habitat and also there may be significant less population of these birds as such, there could be significantly less birds as compared to Broomall country . Without considering this possibility the author cannot conclude that hunting is responsible for decline in population.
However, the author cannot convince me that the Gordon act is the only factor of responsible for the decline of birds.The author asserts that the Broomall Country should not reauthorize the Gordon act itself does not suffice to prove that hinting was responsible for decline not logging as such the Gordon act must reauthorize according to the provisions of the Wayne country.
In the conclusion the editorial has not convinced me that hunting is responsible for decline of the birds.The author must provide some more clear evidence about the the birds population and also about their habitat.To strengthen the argument the author must provide clear information about the cause for the population decline so as not to reauthorize the Gordon act in Broomall Country .
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'similarly', 'so', 'then', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.278761061947 0.25644967241 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.159292035398 0.15541462614 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0818584070796 0.0836205057962 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0553097345133 0.0520304965353 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0154867256637 0.0272364105082 57% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134955752212 0.125424944231 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0442477876106 0.0416121511921 106% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78474559059 2.79052419416 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0287610619469 0.026700313972 108% => OK
Particles: 0.00221238938053 0.001811407834 122% => OK
Determiners: 0.143805309735 0.113004496875 127% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0309734513274 0.0255425247493 121% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0127820249294 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2689.0 2731.13054187 98% => OK
No of words: 430.0 446.07635468 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.25348837209 6.12365571057 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.57801047555 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.402325581395 0.378187486979 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.311627906977 0.287650121315 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.195348837209 0.208842608468 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13488372093 0.135150697306 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78474559059 2.79052419416 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 207.018472906 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.355813953488 0.469332199767 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 38.5353086169 52.1807786196 74% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.039408867 45% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 47.7777777778 23.2022227129 206% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 122.026206455 57.7814097925 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 298.777777778 141.986410481 210% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.7777777778 23.2022227129 206% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 0.724660767414 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.14285714286 136% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 3.58251231527 614% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 78.9405684755 51.9672348444 152% => OK
Elegance: 1.99038461538 1.8405768891 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.458401065636 0.441005458295 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.357193527862 0.135418324435 264% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.1506182273 0.0829849096947 182% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.885765772525 0.58762219726 151% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.187515639588 0.147661913831 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.317804986291 0.193483328276 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960148336043 0.0970749176394 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.54607248951 0.42659136922 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0881597670126 0.0774707102158 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.362439711288 0.312017818177 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466048569495 0.0698173142475 67% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.33743842365 60% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.87684729064 58% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 6.46551724138 77% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 5.36822660099 75% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 14.657635468 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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