Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs
In the given memorandum, the manager of television station concludes that the television station should restore its time devoted to weather and local news. The manager completely fails to provide an cogent solution as he trying to make his claims based on faulty reasoning. Nonetheless chances exists that the television station might still face issues after incorporating his conclusion, the manager disregards such cases.
The manager begins his claims by suggesting that the television station has increased it time on national news than weather and local news. The manager completely fails to assert cohesively as he doesn't provide any stastical data which denote the amount of change in time. Furthermore, the manager posits that the compliants received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. The manager is trying to make his claims based upon unwarranted assumption as he doesn't assert details regarding the viewers. Possibility that the viewers might be older members of the society which further might contribute to negligible amount of total population, the manager doesn't provide any specific information. Nevertheless the manager doesn't provide any information regarding the time interval of the complaints when they were actually recorded, as there might be cases that the viewers now enjoy watching less amount of weather and local news than global news.
Furthermore the author claims that the local businesses have cancelled their business contracts with the television station. The manager is asserting his caims based upon vague terminology. Nevertheless, the local business might be facing some financial crisis due to change in economy or businesses might have got some better deal than the given television station provided deal. The manager is skeptical to such cases. Finally the author concludes that in order to avoid any loss of the televison station's revenue, the station should restore its time devoted to weather and local news. The manager is trying to make an hasty conclusion as certain scernarios provide evidence which are completely on contrary to the manager's conclusion. Moreover the nation might have drawn attention of some of the best television station in the world which might restrict the economy of the given television station or possible shifts in the viewers mood changing their interest from local and weather news to global news might precociously hamper the revenue of the television station. The manager ignore any such scenarious moreover he believes that his conclusion would be aboveabroad which might not be the case.
The manager of the televison station is trying to be too hasty in making his conclusion that the station should restore its time devoted to local and weather news. Had the above discussed scenarious not been evaluated properly incorporating such an change might be lead to capricious outcomes.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 460 350
No. of Characters: 2429 1500
No. of Different Words: 181 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.631 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.28 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.66 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 189 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 151 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 91 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 68 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.211 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.029 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.474 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.431 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.546 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.133 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In the given memorandum, the manager of ...
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Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...The manager completely fails to provide an cogent solution as he trying to make h...
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Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ails to provide an cogent solution as he trying to make his claims based on fault...
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Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nonetheless,
...e his claims based on faulty reasoning. Nonetheless chances exists that the television stat...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n, the manager disregards such cases. The manager begins his claims by suggest...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...letely fails to assert cohesively as he doesnt provide any stastical data which denote...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'stations'' or 'station's'?
Suggestion: stations'; station's
...ed from viewers were concerned with the stations coverage of weather and local news. The...
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Line 3, column 506, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...based upon unwarranted assumption as he doesnt assert details regarding the viewers. P...
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Line 3, column 703, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...amount of total population, the manager doesnt provide any specific information. Never...
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Line 3, column 744, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...oesnt provide any specific information. Nevertheless the manager doesnt provide any informat...
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Line 3, column 769, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...c information. Nevertheless the manager doesnt provide any information regarding the t...
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Line 3, column 920, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as there might be cases that the viewers now enjoy watching less amount of weathe...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ther and local news than global news. Furthermore the author claims that the l...
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Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
... local news than global news. Furthermore the author claims that the local busine...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...The manager is skeptical to such cases. Finally the author concludes that in order to a...
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Line 5, column 627, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...cal news. The manager is trying to make an hasty conclusion as certain scernarios ...
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Line 5, column 726, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'managers'' or 'manager's'?
Suggestion: managers'; manager's
...which are completely on contrary to the managers conclusion. Moreover the nation might h...
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Line 5, column 747, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...on contrary to the managers conclusion. Moreover the nation might have drawn attention o...
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Line 5, column 937, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'viewers'' or 'viewer's'?
Suggestion: viewers'; viewer's
...ision station or possible shifts in the viewers mood changing their interest from local...
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Line 5, column 1094, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'ignores'.
Suggestion: ignores
... of the television station. The manager ignore any such scenarious moreover he believe...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...veabroad which might not be the case. The manager of the televison station is ...
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Line 7, column 255, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...n evaluated properly incorporating such an change might be lead to capricious outc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, regarding, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 55.5748502994 90% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 16.3942115768 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2461.0 2260.96107784 109% => OK
No of words: 456.0 441.139720559 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39692982456 5.12650576532 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68161495881 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 204.123752495 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.414473684211 0.468620217663 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 766.8 705.55239521 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 15.0 8.76447105788 171% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3104809087 57.8364921388 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.526315789 119.503703932 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.324526521 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 5.70786347227 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.25449101796 419% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200133292798 0.218282227539 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837201157177 0.0743258471296 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103786351999 0.0701772020484 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147050829455 0.128457276422 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680253531242 0.0628817314937 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.3799401198 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.3550499002 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.5979740519 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 98.500998004 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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