The Pleasantville School Board should take measures to increase the number of volunteers. Teachers, parents, and other community members agree that it is important for young people to learn the value of community service. Requiring high school students to engage in community service would provide much-needed assistance to worthy local charities and would also help young people understand the importance of giving back to their community. For this reason, the Pleasantville School Board should institute a program requiring students of Pleasantville High School to complete 40 hours of community service prior to graduation.
The following argument is flawed for several reasons. Primarily, the argument is based on the unwarranted assumption that high school students should engage in community service to understand the importance of giving back to their community, rendering the conclusion that Pleasantville School Board should institute a program requiring students to complete 40 hours of community service before graduation invalid.
The argument fails to provide any justification that these high school students do not already attribute so much value to their communities. Had the argument provided information regarding what the students do with their spare time, even then, it would have to show that those activities have no impact on the communities.
Also, the argument leaves so many unanswered questions. Even if the students are to complete a community service project, it shouldn't be capped at 40 hours. Since the focus of the argument is to drive social values and as well supply resources to charitable organisations, it could take less than 40 hours for on student to imbibe this culture and perhaps for one other student, 40 hours will look insufficient.
Because the argument makes several unwarranted assumptions, it fails to prove the fact that students of Pleasantville School should complete 40 hours of community service.
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- The well being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority. 83
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- Some people it is imperative for individuals living in developed nations to reduce energy consumption and lead a more sustainable lifestyle given the evidence of global climatic change. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...omplete a community service project, it shouldnt be capped at 40 hours. Since the focus ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.6327345309 25% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 11.1786427146 18% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 55.5748502994 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 2260.96107784 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 206.0 441.139720559 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12650576532 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.56307096286 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96248975621 2.78398813304 106% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 204.123752495 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587378640777 0.468620217663 125% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 705.55239521 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 19.7664670659 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.0417918992 57.8364921388 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.625 119.503703932 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 23.324526521 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.70786347227 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269878476841 0.218282227539 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110738454084 0.0743258471296 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941560451969 0.0701772020484 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176207711723 0.128457276422 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793466916342 0.0628817314937 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.3799401198 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.3550499002 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.197005988 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.5979740519 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.32208582834 107% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 98.500998004 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 12.3882235529 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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