Recent incursions by deep-sea fishermen into the habitat of the Madagascan shrimp have led to a significant reduction in the species population. With the breeding season fast approaching, the number of shrimp should soon begin to increase. Nonetheless, the population should not return to the levels before the fishing boats arrived. Because this trend is expected to continue over the next several years, the Madagascan shrimp will quickly become an endangered species.
The author conveys that the species population is reduced due to Madagascan shrimp .He futher claims that in short period of time these shrimp with icreases.The author then supports his argument by saying that in nearly future shrimps will become dangerous species. I dont feel that the author's argument is truely correct.
Firstly the author gives the statement that the recent incursion by the deep sea fishermen is that Madagascan shrimp have led to the reduction of species. Here the author havent provided any evidient that the population of spieces is reduciong due to shrimp . It might be happen that the sea population may be reduced due to some other factor or might be possible that the fishes are suffering from a common diseases.
Secondly the author predicts that the shrimps will be incresing their breeding . He has not mentioned any proof for supporting this argument. He could support the statement by exploring or giving any survey point of view.
Thirdly the writer describes that the population cannot arrived before the fishing boats.As in upcoming future madagascan will be coverted into a dangerous species. We cannot predict that further consequences. It may happens that the shrimp no longer lives. we Cannot assume these spieces to be dangerous. the author havent provided any strong reason to support his argument.
All in all , from the author's argument we cannot conclude that the deep sea's species are reducing because of Madagascan shrimp . There could be many other reasons foe these loss of spieces.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 252 350
No. of Characters: 1259 1500
No. of Different Words: 133 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.984 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.996 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.413 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 110 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 70 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.385 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.065 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.391 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.645 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.19 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tion is reduced due to Madagascan shrimp .He futher claims that in short period of...
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Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
...on is reduced due to Madagascan shrimp .He futher claims that in short period of t...
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Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... shrimp .He futher claims that in short period of time these shrimp with icreases.The author t...
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Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...riod of time these shrimp with icreases.The author then supports his argument by sa...
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Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...hrimps will become dangerous species. I dont feel that the authors argument is truel...
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Line 1, column 288, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...dangerous species. I dont feel that the authors argument is truely correct. Firstly ...
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Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...e reduction of species. Here the author havent provided any evidient that the populati...
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Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...on of spieces is reduciong due to shrimp . It might be happen that the sea populat...
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Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'disease'?
Suggestion: disease
... the fishes are suffering from a common diseases. Secondly the author predicts that t...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...shrimps will be incresing their breeding . He has not mentioned any proof for supp...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...cannot arrived before the fishing boats.As in upcoming future madagascan will be c...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cannot arrived before the fishing boats.As in upcoming future madagascan will be c...
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Line 7, column 259, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...appens that the shrimp no longer lives. we Cannot assume these spieces to be dange...
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Line 7, column 307, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...t assume these spieces to be dangerous. the author havent provided any strong reaso...
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Line 7, column 318, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ese spieces to be dangerous. the author havent provided any strong reason to support h...
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Line 9, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... to support his argument. All in all , from the authors argument we cannot con...
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Line 9, column 23, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...his argument. All in all , from the authors argument we cannot conclude that the de...
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Line 9, column 73, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'seas'' or 'sea's'?
Suggestion: seas'; sea's
...gument we cannot conclude that the deep seas species are reducing because of Madagas...
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Line 9, column 127, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...re reducing because of Madagascan shrimp . There could be many other reasons foe t...
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Line 9, column 156, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'reasons'' or 'reason's'?
Suggestion: reasons'; reason's
...scan shrimp . There could be many other reasons foe these loss of spieces.
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Line 9, column 168, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this loss' or 'these losses'?
Suggestion: this loss; these losses
.... There could be many other reasons foe these loss of spieces.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 11.1786427146 18% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 28.8173652695 104% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 55.5748502994 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 2260.96107784 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 250.0 441.139720559 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.56307096286 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52772155879 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 204.123752495 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536 0.468620217663 114% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 705.55239521 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.9805153548 57.8364921388 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 119.503703932 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 23.324526521 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 5.70786347227 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.25449101796 400% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192348328929 0.218282227539 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663266842683 0.0743258471296 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970715576903 0.0701772020484 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113769780982 0.128457276422 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553871719856 0.0628817314937 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.3799401198 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.3550499002 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.197005988 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 98.500998004 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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