Technologies has made our livies complicated. Do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays we are totally based on techonology that we cannot spent even a minute without our luxious things such as smart phones , laptops , watches etc. One set of people believes that technologies have proved to be a boon in today's world where as other feels that technology makes our lives worst.
In addition , I donot agree with the statement that technology has makes our lives complicated , I personally feel it has improved our life to an extreme level. Technology reduces our time , so we can use the time in benificial inventions as well as to improve quality of our livies .For instances nowadays shopkeeper uses calculators to calculate the total amount of rupees.These long calculation reduces their time so they can give their precious time to their customers and improve their standards.
The another main factor is that technologies such as smart phones or laptops helps us for many uses such as for suffering useful educational details or for searching the destination. A recent survey from times of india shows that 80% of people uses their smart phones for tracking their destination. Even tracking systems are used by police department for tracking crime location.
Television is another source that helps our country to spread ideas as well as to make aware about the lattest senerio of countries. Even media helps us a lot. Recently earthequke occured in andaman nicobar island . Even we can take precautions when we are aware of such incidents, in such cases media took a huge role in spreading the news all over cosmopolitian nations.
All in all we can conclude that technologies were prove to be a supporter in our lives .They have improved our lives as well as helps our country to reach at a peak point.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, as for, as to, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 292.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96917808219 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72110408826 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.1590905273 60.3974514979 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.916666667 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143517989413 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052416115495 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595823415713 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856576798659 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547777427089 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.