Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs.
The memorandum from the business manger of a television station is filled with a lack of information. The reasons for all cause is subjected only on late night show giving
In a past year, more time is devoted to national news compared to local and weather news. The time provided nation news and local news are not mentioned in memorandum. If a late night show is of one hour and time given for local news earlier was fourty minutes and now, it changed to thirty five minutes, there is not significant change in alloted time. so, in a memorandum it should be given how much time alloted for national news and local news.
In a memorandum, it is mentioned there are complaints from viewers. The complaints might be from same person on multiple occasions or some viewers group who wants to see local news or weather news. To find out the legitimacy of this complaints, telivision station should do survey asking various
viewers what they want to see more on late night show, national news or local news or in a same amount.
The local bussinesses canceled cotracts for a late night show is not only dependent on a television show showing local news or national news. The time alloted for advertising is reduced or less local advertises have been shown on a show, this dillema should be resolved by tv station. There might be a case, local businesses have changed the way of advertising. They might be advertising in a local news paper or on a radio. The reason for loosing advertising contract should be found out.
The memorandum from business manager is full of devoid of information. In a
memorandum no numerical figures are given to draw any conclusion. In a Memorundum threre should be complete information.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: If a late night show is of one hour and time given for local news earlier was fourty minutes and now, it changed to thirty five minutes, there is not significant change in alloted time. so, in a memorandum it should be given how much time alloted for national news and local news.
Error: alloted Suggestion: allowed
Error: fourty Suggestion: forty
Sentence: To find out the legitimacy of this complaints, telivision station should do survey asking various viewers what they want to see more on late night show, national news or local news or in a same amount.
Error: telivision Suggestion: television
Sentence: The local bussinesses canceled cotracts for a late night show is not only dependent on a television show showing local news or national news.
Error: cotracts Suggestion: contracts
Error: bussinesses Suggestion: businesses
Sentence: The time alloted for advertising is reduced or less local advertises have been shown on a show, this dillema should be resolved by tv station.
Error: dillema Suggestion: diploma
Error: alloted Suggestion: allowed
Sentence: In a Memorundum threre should be complete information.
Error: threre Suggestion: three
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argument 1 -- not OK
argument 2 -- not OK
argument 3 -- OK
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 299 350
No. of Characters: 1384 1500
No. of Different Words: 133 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.158 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.629 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.625 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 90 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 71 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.688 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.323 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.062 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.374 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.626 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.155 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: MANGER_MANAGER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'business manager'?
Suggestion: business manager
The memorandum from the business manger of a television station is filled with ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...subjected only on late night show giving In a past year, more time is devoted to ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...not significant change in alloted time. so, in a memorandum it should be given how...
^^
Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...her news. To find out the legitimacy of this complaints, telivision station should d...
^^^^
Line 8, column 400, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...g. They might be advertising in a local news paper or on a radio. The reason for loosing a...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...om business manager is full of devoid of information. In a memorandum no numeri...
^^
Line 10, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is full of devoid of information. In a memorandum no numerical figures are give...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 13.6137724551 7% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 28.8173652695 24% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 2260.96107784 63% => OK
No of words: 299.0 441.139720559 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77926421405 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69476403869 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 204.123752495 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464882943144 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 705.55239521 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.0780587699 57.8364921388 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3125 119.503703932 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 23.324526521 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 5.70786347227 7% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374229652456 0.218282227539 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13914094901 0.0743258471296 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123029219334 0.0701772020484 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172106988528 0.128457276422 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147797929214 0.0628817314937 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.3799401198 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.3550499002 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.5979740519 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.32208582834 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 98.500998004 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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