A recent sales study indicates that consumption of seafood dishes in bay city restaurants has increased by 30 percent during the past five years. yet there are no currently operating city restaurants whose specialty is seafood . moreover, the majority of families in bay city are two income families and a nationwide study has shown that such families eat significantly fewer home cooked meals than they did a decade ago but at the same time express more concern about healthful eating. therefore, the new captain seafood restaurant that specializes in seafood should quite popular and profitable.
The given editorial reprents few points for moving towards the conclusion that how consuming seafood in bay city is popular in some or other way. The analysis presented here seems quite ostensible , still it doesnt provide its proper veracity.
Begining with the sales study presented we can say that the consuption about seafood is evaluated but what about consuption of the other food types? That isnt mentioned at all. As the statitics shows the study of former 5 years but it is nowhere mentioned the earlier rate of consumption of sea food. We don't know wheather the consuption previously was 109% or 40% , although we are just given the increment percentage which isnt sufficient at all. It might be because of the increased popluation , therefore we cant assume surely that the rate of eating seafood is increased.
Moving ahead with the second statement which indicates that there isn't any famous restaurant which serves the best seafood. But it isn't mendatory that the eaters or residents of the bau city only eats seafood served in restaurants which have speciallity in seafood. It is possibly true that seafood's availibility at stalls rather than big fancy restaurants Or its likely possible that people eat seafood made at home.
Countinuing with the preceding statement of author's, thye income is dragged into the argument. Although the familes of the bay city has two breadwinners that clearly doesn't indicate that the more they eat the morte they eat junk food. However the the study about the eating fewer meales at home is made according to the national base , which not necessarily true about mentioned bay city. Average is presented so it is definately possible that some states or cities falls under average or greater than avearge. Thus we basically don't know in which category mentioned bay city falls.
Mavericking the argument we can not assume that the healthy food is either seafood or anything else. For some people living in bay city its true that eating heathy food is tantamount to eating seafood as they are likey to be concerned with gaining protean and other vitamins. Other residents of this bay city may prefer to eat food with less oil or any other food other than seafood. So, definition of healthy food varies from person to person is damn true. The restaurant mentioned here "New caption seafood restaurant" may or may not be popular as there are various reasons mentioned here already. bay city's citizens may often go the restaurant only those who find seafood tempting or they may not. We cant judge weather this reastaurant makes profit or not.
Concluding the auther's argument we can conceed that the flaws presented here are not utterly convincing and are not all sufficient to jump to the decision about the restaurant making profit or being popular.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The given editorial reprents few points for moving towards the conclusion that how consuming seafood in bay city is popular in some or other way.
Error: reprents Suggestion: repents
Sentence: Begining with the sales study presented we can say that the consuption about seafood is evaluated but what about consuption of the other food types?
Error: consuption Suggestion: consumption
Sentence: As the statitics shows the study of former 5 years but it is nowhere mentioned the earlier rate of consumption of sea food.
Error: statitics Suggestion: statistics
Sentence: We don't know wheather the consuption previously was 109 or 40 , although we are just given the increment percentage which isnt sufficient at all.
Error: wheather Suggestion: whether
Error: consuption Suggestion: consumption
Sentence: It might be because of the increased popluation , therefore we cant assume surely that the rate of eating seafood is increased.
Error: popluation Suggestion: population
Sentence: But it isn't mendatory that the eaters or residents of the bau city only eats seafood served in restaurants which have speciallity in seafood.
Error: isn Suggestion: ion
Error: bau Suggestion: ban
Error: speciallity Suggestion: specially
Error: mendatory Suggestion: mandatory
Sentence: It is possibly true that seafood's availibility at stalls rather than big fancy restaurants Or its likely possible that people eat seafood made at home.
Error: availibility Suggestion: availability
Sentence: Countinuing with the preceding statement of author's, thye income is dragged into the argument.
Error: thye Suggestion: than
Sentence: Although the familes of the bay city has two breadwinners that clearly doesn't indicate that the more they eat the morte they eat junk food.
Error: doesn Suggestion: does
Error: familes Suggestion: families
Error: morte Suggestion: more
Sentence: However the the study about the eating fewer meales at home is made according to the national base , which not necessarily true about mentioned bay city.
Error: meales Suggestion: meals
Sentence: Average is presented so it is definately possible that some states or cities falls under average or greater than avearge.
Error: avearge Suggestion: average
Error: definately Suggestion: definitely
Sentence: For some people living in bay city its true that eating heathy food is tantamount to eating seafood as they are likey to be concerned with gaining protean and other vitamins.
Error: likey Suggestion: like
Error: heathy Suggestion: healthy
Sentence: We cant judge weather this reastaurant makes profit or not.
Error: reastaurant Suggestion: restaurant
Sentence: Concluding the auther's argument we can conceed that the flaws presented here are not utterly convincing and are not all sufficient to jump to the decision about the restaurant making profit or being popular.
Error: conceed Suggestion: conceded
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argument 1 -- not OK
argument 2 -- OK
argument 3 -- not exactly
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 24 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 473 350
No. of Characters: 2290 1500
No. of Different Words: 232 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.664 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.841 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.522 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 159 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 121 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 82 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 59 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.919 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.545 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.303 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.493 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.127 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...is presented here seems quite ostensible , still it doesnt provide its proper vera...
^^
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... here seems quite ostensible , still it doesnt provide its proper veracity. Beginin...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...onsuption of the other food types? That isnt mentioned at all. As the statitics show...
^^^^
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ier rate of consumption of sea food. We dont know wheather the consuption previously...
^^^^
Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he consuption previously was 109% or 40% , although we are just given the incremen...
^^
Line 3, column 426, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...st given the increment percentage which isnt sufficient at all. It might be because ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 497, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t be because of the increased popluation , therefore we cant assume surely that th...
^^
Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...the increased popluation , therefore we cant assume surely that the rate of eating s...
^^^^
Line 4, column 67, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...nd statement which indicates that there isnt any famous restaurant which serves the ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...t which serves the best seafood. But it isnt mendatory that the eaters or residents ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 96, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ye income is dragged into the argument. Although the familes of the bay city has two bre...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 167, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... city has two breadwinners that clearly doesnt indicate that the more they eat the mor...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 236, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... they eat the morte they eat junk food. However the the study about the eating fewer me...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 244, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...t the morte they eat junk food. However the the study about the eating fewer meales at ...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 244, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...t the morte they eat junk food. However the the study about the eating fewer meales at ...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 334, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e is made according to the national base , which not necessarily true about mentio...
^^
Line 6, column 512, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... under average or greater than avearge. Thus we basically dont know in which categor...
^^^^
Line 6, column 530, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...greater than avearge. Thus we basically dont know in which category mentioned bay ci...
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Line 8, column 611, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Bay
...various reasons mentioned here already. bay citys citizens may often go the restaur...
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Line 8, column 715, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nd seafood tempting or they may not. We cant judge weather this reastaurant makes pr...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, second, so, still, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.6327345309 112% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 11.1786427146 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 13.6137724551 154% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 28.8173652695 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 55.5748502994 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2347.0 2260.96107784 104% => OK
No of words: 468.0 441.139720559 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01495726496 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56894919453 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 204.123752495 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491452991453 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 705.55239521 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3666781646 57.8364921388 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.043478261 119.503703932 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.347826087 23.324526521 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30434782609 5.70786347227 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.25449101796 381% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225282052849 0.218282227539 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684711041986 0.0743258471296 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550109372339 0.0701772020484 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116736523708 0.128457276422 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057916393546 0.0628817314937 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.3550499002 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 98.500998004 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.