The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
As the author states that the best way for any society to prepare young people for leadership in any sectors by providing them with sense of coordination not by competition seems ostensible. But according to my point of view both of these factors plays significant role for any young person. Without competition one can't adhere into a industrial environment and it is also not possible that without cooperation any industry survives as industry may depend on ither industry for raw material.
Beginning with coopration, it plays crutial role in any field, it may be government, industry or other fields. How cooperation plays its role, we have several examples. The widely known NASA consists of many reserachers, scientists and other staff working towards only one goal. And that is how space technology can be enhanced. They woek on cooperative basis, rather if they internally try to disprove other's theory then the progess for space technology cant not be made. They use the previous derivation of one another's. In our daily routine, we have many more examples to consider. Like Football, in this game there are several players. It is possible that among those players all don't have same capabilities rather they work in a team (in a cooperation). Individually one player may has ability to beat another player of team but to beat opponent team they must work with coordination.
Any individual can provide the idea but it requires a team to accomplish it. The idea can be amazing and may be revolutionary but it takes the support of the people or specific team members to implement it. The well known Bill gates had an amazing idea but it took the whole team to pour it into reality. Same thing applies to industry as well as other fields.
As cooperation is necessity so as competition. Imagine if there isn't compettion how athelets made records of the highest, fastest speed in olympics. A healthy competition is mandatory in any field to acheive more success. Besides this, two companies producing same product have cometion then they will try to enhance their product and eventually it will provide benifit to the common people or customers. If they don't have competition then they keep producing product and stay complacent not complaisant. Competition plays vital role in education field as well as there are more competition among students, any student wants to achieve more marks and wants to prove intelligence. If none of the students in class worry about securing first rank in the glass no one pays attention towards hardwork.
Concluding the statement, I would like to say that competition say a role in success of company but cooperation plays more significant role towards achieving desired goal. Cooperation is mandatory with little influence of competition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 12.9106741573 232% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2338.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 460.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08260869565 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82980023609 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515217391304 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 743.4 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9095346158 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9230769231 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180644660604 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435235313609 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753236099284 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905143761263 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848795415699 0.0667264976115 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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