A recent sales study indicates that consumption of seafood dishes in bay city restaurants has increased by 30 percent during the past five years. yet there are no currently operating city restaurants whose specialty is seafood . moreover, the majority of families in bay city are two income families and a nationwide study has shown that such families eat significantly fewer home cooked meals than they did a decade ago but at the same time express more concern about healthful eating. therefore, the new captain seafood restaurant that specializes in seafood should quite popular and profitable.
As the given states that the greatness of individuals can be only decided by those who live after them sounds plausible. There are other possible ways in which veracity of people are truly admired.
Begining with, the fields such as arts or writing , the wellknown books written by writter the aesthetic paintings can immidiately seek the attention of people. Morever such people are valuled while they are still alive. One amazing painting can make an artist from nadir stage to the pinnacle. Similarly in the case of a writer, innitially writer may write many books but failed to seek attention from the readers but one content repleteful book can prove himself in field of writing. Thus the sttement compells with the above reasonings.
Coming to the other part of the statement we can say that it isnt actually false. Many great scientists may acheive respect and great honor after their death as their researches might jave been useful to another scientist in the field. Initially reaserch done about Rocket as well as space science was not at all lauded at all.After then when again the reseach begins then these previous reaseraches sounded useful. That's where the contribution of scientist was considered useful. Social reformers Mahatma Gandhi,Jawaharlal Nehru made tremendous effort for India ; they still lies in our memory as their deeds are enjoyed by us today.
However, the greatness of individual can be considered well either when he is alive or he isn't alive. The statement is partadoxial and it is well elaborated. I personally agree that the individul should continue doing the deeds rather than worrying about wheather it will be appreciated or not.The greatness of individuals is most likely to be considered by those who live after them.
Finally, I concede with the presented statement that the importance of individuals can be decided by only those who are the ancestors not by the contemporaries.
- Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents. 54
- In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as hero. 58
- The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them not by their contemporaries. 100
- The following appeared in a memo from the director of student housing at Buckingham College."To serve the housing needs of our students, Buckingham College should build a number of new dormitories. Buckingham's enrollment is growing and, based on current 50
- A recent sales study indicates that consumption of seafood dishes in bay city restaurants has increased by 30 percent during the past five years. yet there are no currently operating city restaurants whose specialty is seafood . moreover, the majority of 16
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, however, may, similarly, so, still, then, thus, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 316.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11708860759 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72226984973 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610759493671 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.8820688518 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0625 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.243740707755 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0831039109588 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150359130593 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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