A recent sales study indicates that consumption of seafood dishes in Bay City restaurants has increased by 30 percent during the past five years. Yet there are no currently operating city restaurants whose specialty is seafood. Moreover, the majority of families in Bay City are two-income families, and a nationwide study has shown that such families eat significantly fewer home-cooked meals than they did a decade ago but at the same time express more concern about healthful eating. Therefore, the new Captain Seafood restaurant that specializes in seafood should be quite popular and profitable.
The argument concludes that due to increase in consumptions of sea food and in addition to the fact that most of families in the city are two- income families, so the new Captain sea food restaurant should be quite popular and profitable is based on faulty assumptions. There are flaws in this argument, which can turn the tide against the conclusion.
Bay city area has recorded a 30 percent increase in consumption of seafood dishes in ast five years. This statement is flawed at many strata. It might be the case that bay city is a tourist location where people come to spend holidays. Bay city might have a beach and the reach to ocean is very easy for bay city people. Due to this getting sea food to eat becomes quite simple. The restaurants have seen the increase in sea food consumption, because the tourist who stay there find the sea food delicious and they don't get this delicious food back in thier hometown. But for the local's sea food is a common thing. It may be the case that the tourist come to bay city only for some months in a year. During which the restaurants observe a hike in consumption of sea food. This also means that for the remaining major part of the year as some minor numbers or almost no tourist comes to bay city the sea food consumption is back to normal.
It is also possible that as sea food is a common food in bay city, the locals there know very well how to cook and make it delicious, so they don't have the requirement to go restaurants for having seafood. But maybe they go to restaurants for having another variety of food, considering the fact as stated in argument that the existing restaurants are not specializing in sea food.In addition to this the survey which has been taken into consideration in argument, that 2 income families have lower home cooked meals compared to a decade ago, this survey is a nationwide analysis. But they are applying this to Bay city, which maybe one of the many cities in that country. As always exceptions are present. The 2 income families in bay city, may have the head of the family perform 2 jobs every day, but maybe their better halves cook meals for the family or vice versa. The survey considered here does not show which type of people they have considered.
The argument has concluded that the establishment of Captain seafood at bay city which specializes in sea food will be profitable is highly flawed. As discussed above that people of bay city may now how to cook delicious sea food at home and only go to restaurants for eating other type of food. In addition to this the tourist time in bay city is only for some months and due to which the Captain seafood restaurant things it will earn profits, that is not going to happen mostly. Because it only specializes in seafood. Once the visitors are gone there will be mostly no customer in their restaurant, thereby having huge losses in business.
Hence, the argument has many faulty assumptions, which might conclude that the conclusion is not correct. The argument must consider the above-mentioned scenarios, to come up with an acceptable conclusion, which in this case is clearly not done.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 564 350
No. of Characters: 2531 1500
No. of Different Words: 226 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.873 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.488 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.472 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 152 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 107 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.56 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.532 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.44 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.309 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.483 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.072 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The argument concludes that due to increase ...
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Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the families') or simply say ''most families''.
Suggestion: most of the families; most families
...a food and in addition to the fact that most of families in the city are two- income families, s...
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Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and in addition to the fact that most of families in the city are two- income fam...
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Line 3, column 516, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...re find the sea food delicious and they dont get this delicious food back in thier h...
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Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... to cook and make it delicious, so they dont have the requirement to go restaurants ...
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Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...urants are not specializing in sea food.In addition to this the survey which has b...
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Line 5, column 674, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...one of the many cities in that country. As always exceptions are present. The 2 in...
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Line 5, column 956, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch type of people they have considered. The argument has concluded that the est...
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Line 7, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e of people they have considered. The argument has concluded that the establi...
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Line 7, column 484, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ts, that is not going to happen mostly. Because it only specializes in seafood. Once th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, may, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.6327345309 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 13.6137724551 176% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 28.8173652695 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 55.5748502994 119% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 16.3942115768 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2590.0 2260.96107784 115% => OK
No of words: 561.0 441.139720559 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61675579323 5.12650576532 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86676880123 4.56307096286 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54649539079 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 204.123752495 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.413547237077 0.468620217663 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 810.9 705.55239521 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 19.7664670659 126% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.1300823285 57.8364921388 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.6 119.503703932 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.44 23.324526521 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76 5.70786347227 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203955735705 0.218282227539 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738399787483 0.0743258471296 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079964444069 0.0701772020484 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115754755461 0.128457276422 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825288561209 0.0628817314937 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.3799401198 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.3550499002 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.5979740519 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.32208582834 90% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 98.500998004 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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