In surveys Mason City residents rank water sports (swimming, boating, and
fishing) among their favorite recreational activities. The Mason River flowing
through the city is rarely used for these pursuits, however, and the city park
department devotes little of its budget to maintaining riverside recreational
facilities. For years there have been complaints from residents about the
quality of the river’s water and the river’s smell. In response, the state has
recently announced plans to clean up Mason River. Use of the river for water
sports is, therefore, sure to increase. The city government should for that
reason devote more money in this year’s budget to riverside recreational
facilities.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated
assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends
on the assumptions and what the implications are if the assumptions prove
unwarranted.
The Mason city rank water sports is famous among them for recreational activities.The mason river flowing through
the city is rarely used for pursuits. For years the residents of the city are complaining about the waters quality
as well as the river's smell. Here we are going to talk abt the number of cases where the mason river is to be cleaned
as fast as how the recreational activities increase depending by it and how the city government should for that
reason devote more money in this year's budget to riverside recreational facilities.
First, we know that the mason river is being the main factor for the recreational activities and for city government for
its proudness that Mason city river water sports is famous in the city.First we can assume that the city government
has lots of financial problems in the city and as well as the residents of the city wants the city government to grant their
wish and produce an surprising effect for the people to delay their work for cleaning the river.Second we can assume that
the riverside residents lost interest in cleaning the river due to the reason the river's quality and consumption of wastage
near the recreational facilities.
So, on coming for the first case we know that city government has lots of financial problems due to expenditure of other people
problems, states economy, election, etc..The city government has to think of spending on the mason river that in increasing on
next year's income. The city residents want the river to be cleaned so as to fulfill their wishes on the enhancement of recreational
activities such as swimming, ferry race, etc..lots of talented people who want to show their talent on stage as in the riverside
will start losing hope as they regret the fact that it is uncleaned. Even the city people who volunteer as workers at the riverside
will ignore the fact due to its smell. The second case is that consumption of wastage causes this problem that the river is dry and dirty
which makes cleaning of river unacceptable.
The problem with this solution can be only that riverside people have to take charge in cleaning the river thoroughly and asking the city
government for little money for renovating the recreational facilities and make them send more residents for cleaning and allowing men
across the river at both ends. This makes the river clean and all the activities can be rescheduled from the day it is clean. Similar
an example that can be dams that is renovated every year for clean water and it also fulfills the city residents too with the government's
income. Therefore we can say that the dam is like the mason river which can be cleaned like we discussed methods or actions earlier.
The conclusion is that the mason city rank water sports can be run as usual when we take certain actions without any concealment of no or
false impressions about the task which we are going to take. Everything is in our hands and will be taken into consideration every step
we take.
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- In surveys Mason City residents rank water sports swimming boating and fishing among their favorite recreational activities The Mason River flowing through the city is rarely used for these pursuits however and the city park department devotes little of i 50
- In surveys Mason City residents rank water sports swimming boating and fishing among their favorite recreational activities The Mason River flowing through the city is rarely used for these pursuits however and the city park department devotes little of i 53
- In surveys Mason City residents rank water sports swimming boating and fishing among their favorite recreational activities The Mason River flowing through the city is rarely used for these pursuits however and the city park department devotes little of i 50
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... among them for recreational activities.The mason river flowing through the city i...
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Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are complaining about the waters quality as well as the rivers smell. Here we are...
^^^
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s where the mason river is to be cleaned as fast as how the recreational activiti...
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Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... how the city government should for that reason devote more money in this years b...
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Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... for that reason devote more money in this years budget to riverside recreational ...
^^^^
Line 8, column 72, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: First
...iver water sports is famous in the city.First we can assume that the city government ...
^^^^^
Line 10, column 18, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...rnment to grant their wish and produce an surprising effect for the people to del...
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Line 10, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Second
...delay their work for cleaning the river.Second we can assume that the riverside resid...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 83, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'rivers'' or 'river's'?
Suggestion: rivers'; river's
...leaning the river due to the reason the rivers quality and consumption of wastage ne...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ivers quality and consumption of wastage near the recreational facilities. So,...
^^^
Line 15, column 40, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... problems, states economy, election, etc..The city government has to think of spen...
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Line 15, column 42, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...roblems, states economy, election, etc..The city government has to think of spendin...
^^^
Line 16, column 6, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...mason river that in increasing on next years income. The city residents want the riv...
^^^^^
Line 16, column 68, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... residents want the river to be cleaned so as to fulfill their wishes on the enhancement...
^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 45, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...vities such as swimming, ferry race, etc..lots of talented people who want to show...
^^
Line 24, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eduled from the day it is clean. Similar an example that can be dams that is reno...
^^^
Line 25, column 127, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...ulfills the city residents too with the governments income. Therefore we can say that the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 26, column 9, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...dents too with the governments income. Therefore we can say that the dam is like the mas...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 28, column 133, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...tain actions without any concealment of no or false impressions about the task w...
^^
Line 28, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...actions without any concealment of no or false impressions about the task which w...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, so, therefore, well, as to, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.6327345309 127% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 13.6137724551 162% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 28.8173652695 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 55.5748502994 101% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2517.0 2260.96107784 111% => OK
No of words: 517.0 441.139720559 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86847195358 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61940831893 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 204.123752495 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.408123791103 0.468620217663 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 771.3 705.55239521 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.8473053892 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.025171411 57.8364921388 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.785714286 119.503703932 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.9285714286 23.324526521 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.70786347227 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 5.15768463074 485% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.25449101796 381% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373779958241 0.218282227539 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156556811953 0.0743258471296 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134681117428 0.0701772020484 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132696404445 0.128457276422 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108667973269 0.0628817314937 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 14.3799401198 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 48.3550499002 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.197005988 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 98.500998004 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.1389221557 147% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... among them for recreational activities.The mason river flowing through the city i...
^^^
Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are complaining about the waters quality as well as the rivers smell. Here we are...
^^^
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s where the mason river is to be cleaned as fast as how the recreational activiti...
^^^
Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... how the city government should for that reason devote more money in this years b...
^^^
Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... for that reason devote more money in this years budget to riverside recreational ...
^^^^
Line 8, column 72, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: First
...iver water sports is famous in the city.First we can assume that the city government ...
^^^^^
Line 10, column 18, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...rnment to grant their wish and produce an surprising effect for the people to del...
^^
Line 10, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Second
...delay their work for cleaning the river.Second we can assume that the riverside resid...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 83, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'rivers'' or 'river's'?
Suggestion: rivers'; river's
...leaning the river due to the reason the rivers quality and consumption of wastage ne...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ivers quality and consumption of wastage near the recreational facilities. So,...
^^^
Line 15, column 40, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... problems, states economy, election, etc..The city government has to think of spen...
^^
Line 15, column 42, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...roblems, states economy, election, etc..The city government has to think of spendin...
^^^
Line 16, column 6, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...mason river that in increasing on next years income. The city residents want the riv...
^^^^^
Line 16, column 68, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... residents want the river to be cleaned so as to fulfill their wishes on the enhancement...
^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 45, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...vities such as swimming, ferry race, etc..lots of talented people who want to show...
^^
Line 24, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eduled from the day it is clean. Similar an example that can be dams that is reno...
^^^
Line 25, column 127, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...ulfills the city residents too with the governments income. Therefore we can say that the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 26, column 9, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...dents too with the governments income. Therefore we can say that the dam is like the mas...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 28, column 133, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...tain actions without any concealment of no or false impressions about the task w...
^^
Line 28, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...actions without any concealment of no or false impressions about the task which w...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, so, therefore, well, as to, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.6327345309 127% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 13.6137724551 162% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 28.8173652695 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 55.5748502994 101% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2517.0 2260.96107784 111% => OK
No of words: 517.0 441.139720559 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86847195358 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61940831893 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 204.123752495 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.408123791103 0.468620217663 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 771.3 705.55239521 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.8473053892 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.025171411 57.8364921388 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.785714286 119.503703932 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.9285714286 23.324526521 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.70786347227 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 5.15768463074 485% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.25449101796 381% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373779958241 0.218282227539 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156556811953 0.0743258471296 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134681117428 0.0701772020484 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132696404445 0.128457276422 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108667973269 0.0628817314937 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 14.3799401198 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 48.3550499002 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.197005988 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 98.500998004 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.1389221557 147% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.