In surveys Mason City residents rank water sports (swimming, boating and fishing) among their favorite recreational activities. The Mason River flowing through the city is rarely used for these pursuits, however, and the city park department devotes little of its budget to maintaining riverside recreational facilities. For years there have been complaints from residents about the quality of the river's water and the river's smell. In response, the state has recently announced plans to clean up Mason River. Use of the river for water sports is therefore sure to increase. The city government should for that reason devote more money in this year's budget to riverside recreational facilities.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on the assumptions and what the implications are if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
Based on the survey's results, city government officials have announced that Mason City River will be cleaned up because the residenst have complained about it's effluvium odor. In addition to this they will also devote money to riverside recreational facilities, because the local residents happen to share an interest in recreational sports (swimming, boating, and fishing). The Hygen of the river is certainy an urgent matter that needs to be fixed. However, this survey is not enough to conclude that devoting more money for recreational facilites, will result in more usuage of the river.
The survey concluded one important thing, that the Mason Ciy river has a foul odor, and because of this, it is assumed that, this is the reason why the river isn't being used, let alone for recreational water sport. The suvrvey does not mention the reason why the the river has that foul smell, perhaps, there is a liquid to keep the water clean, and maybe that is the reason for the smell. Also, when it comes the recreational sports, the survey is not specific enough in which we assume that the people interviewed were asked if they actually did the water sport, or if it's something that they would be intered in doing. There is difference between saying it, an being and active water sports ahtlete. This is not concrete enough to make a drastic change towards putting more money into recreational facilities, and assume that people will use it for water sports.
City government officials did the right thing in doing the survey to see what the city needs to have alterated. They are also right to clean up the river, and do something about the smell.However this survey does no justice for the peaen of a recreational facility.The survey needs to be more specific, have different options of contoversial topics within the town in regards to what other changes need to be done to benefit the city and it's residents. Perhaps, the local libray needs some construction update, or the local schools need some adjustments. An open pannel should determine these types of issues, and then preceeded by a survey in which residents can confidently choose what to do the monetary funds.
This blanket statement need further investigation to expand on what to do with the city's monetary funds. They are in the right path by, starting with adjustments for Mason City River. However, assuming that by creating a recreational facility for water sports, will benefit the city, is not enough based on the ambiguos survey.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Based on the survey's results, city government officials have announced that Mason City River will be cleaned up because the residenst have complained about it's effluvium odor.
Error: residenst Suggestion: resident
Error: effluvium Suggestion: effective
Sentence: The Hygen of the river is certainy an urgent matter that needs to be fixed.
Error: certainy Suggestion: certain
Sentence: However, this survey is not enough to conclude that devoting more money for recreational facilites, will result in more usuage of the river.
Error: usuage Suggestion: usage
Error: facilites Suggestion: facilities
Sentence: The survey concluded one important thing, that the Mason Ciy river has a foul odor, and because of this, it is assumed that, this is the reason why the river isn't being used, let alone for recreational water sport.
Error: isn Suggestion: ion
Sentence: The suvrvey does not mention the reason why the the river has that foul smell, perhaps, there is a liquid to keep the water clean, and maybe that is the reason for the smell.
Error: suvrvey Suggestion: survey
Sentence: Also, when it comes the recreational sports, the survey is not specific enough in which we assume that the people interviewed were asked if they actually did the water sport, or if it's something that they would be intered in doing.
Error: intered Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: There is difference between saying it, an being and active water sports ahtlete.
Error: ahtlete Suggestion: athlete
Sentence: City government officials did the right thing in doing the survey to see what the city needs to have alterated.
Error: alterated Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: They are also right to clean up the river, and do something about the smell.However this survey does no justice for the peaen of a recreational facility.The survey needs to be more specific, have different options of contoversial topics within the town in regards to what other changes need to be done to benefit the city and it's residents.
Error: peaen Suggestion: pen
Error: contoversial Suggestion: controversial
Sentence: Perhaps, the local libray needs some construction update, or the local schools need some adjustments.
Error: libray Suggestion: library
Sentence: An open pannel should determine these types of issues, and then preceeded by a survey in which residents can confidently choose what to do the monetary funds.
Error: preceeded Suggestion: proceeded
Error: pannel Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: However, assuming that by creating a recreational facility for water sports, will benefit the city, is not enough based on the ambiguos survey.
Error: ambiguos Suggestion: ambiguous
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 16 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 426 350
No. of Characters: 2034 1500
No. of Different Words: 192 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.543 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.775 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.466 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 133 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 89 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.625 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.262 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.375 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.35 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.546 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.107 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Based on the surveys results, city gover...
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...ll result in more usuage of the river. The survey concluded one important thing...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
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... that, this is the reason why the river isnt being used, let alone for recreational ...
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Line 2, column 263, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
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...suvrvey does not mention the reason why the the river has that foul smell, perhaps, the...
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Line 2, column 263, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...suvrvey does not mention the reason why the the river has that foul smell, perhaps, the...
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Line 2, column 665, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... There is difference between saying it, an being and active water sports ahtlete. ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... people will use it for water sports. City government officials did the right ...
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Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...river, and do something about the smell.However this survey does no justice for the pea...
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Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...river, and do something about the smell.However this survey does no justice for the pea...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...or the peaen of a recreational facility.The survey needs to be more specific, have ...
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Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... of contoversial topics within the town in regards to what other changes need to be done to b...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...choose what to do the monetary funds. This blanket statement need further inve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, may, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 28.8173652695 111% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 55.5748502994 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 2260.96107784 92% => OK
No of words: 423.0 441.139720559 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92907801418 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58117273825 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 204.123752495 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477541371158 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 705.55239521 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.67365269461 478% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9690926846 57.8364921388 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.3125 119.503703932 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4375 23.324526521 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 5.70786347227 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270929681585 0.218282227539 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099431788754 0.0743258471296 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566308532253 0.0701772020484 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187888545831 0.128457276422 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411068439254 0.0628817314937 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.3799401198 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.3550499002 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.197005988 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 98.500998004 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.