Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
Cow flu is a serious issue that needs to be inoculated depending on the area affected and its impact. However, this cannot cause a complete disturbance on the community, the process needs to be efficient enough that it decreases that amount of people infected every time this check is done. As mentioned before something like this can cause a major disturbance in a community. This is something that needs to be discussed as a community: people, farm workers, politicians, medicals, etc. This issue can affect everyone, one way or another, therefore, a city/state/town, decision needs to be made on how to administer the disease.
If this issue is pivotal within the community, then this becomes a city matter. People who are affected, or in different positions need to consult this matter, and determine what is the best way to open it to the public. Surveys, and data need to be administered around this disease in order to determine the causing factor of it. Perhaps, not the whole state or city it affected, therefore only a small portion needs to be investigated, to determine the outbreak of it, and contain the situation. Although it seems facile to mandate inoculations against cow flu by making it routinely, it not might be the best solution, if it causes disturbance.
This is disease is not an epidemic, drastic measures are not to be taken, but precaution is important. Again, holding a town meeting can determine the measures needed to contain this problem. In doing a survey within medicals and the community the severity of this disease can be measured. Perhaps it can be a correlation with their medical history, or something that is part of their everyday routine, and they are not aware. In doing this, perhaps medicals can conduct their own surveys to determine common factors, and ever meteorologist, geologist can be involved as well. There can be different factors for the cause of this disease.
Lastly, some people don't need to do this because they have never been affected by it, or have no family history with this disease. It is unethical for someone, who has had not contact, or knowledge of it, to be routinely administered. Perhaps, for the people who have been diagnosed with can be kept on surveillance. Their immediate family members can be kept on quarantine until they have all been cleared. Maybe then, a routine check up can be administered if needed until all family members are cleared.
Cow flu is a serious disease but not enough to cause a pandemic. Which is why measures need to be taken according to the needs of the city. This will determine if the city or community in facts needs a routine check to prevent a pandemic, or just simply need to makes changes to decrease or contain the situation, like we do a flu virus. All different parties of the city need to put their input before committing to a routine administered inoculation before drastic measure are taken. What's best for the city as a whole needs to be put into perspective, and not stress of over something that could be miniscule.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 7 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 526 350
No. of Characters: 2449 1500
No. of Different Words: 218 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.789 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.656 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.624 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 174 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 139 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 84 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 59 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.04 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.534 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.44 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.303 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.522 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.12 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Cow flu is a serious issue that needs to...
^^^
Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...infected every time this check is done. As mentioned before something like this ca...
^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...made on how to administer the disease. If this issue is pivotal within the comm...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st solution, if it causes disturbance. This is disease is not an epidemic, dras...
^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...actors for the cause of this disease. Lastly, some people dont need to do this...
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Line 4, column 24, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... this disease. Lastly, some people dont need to do this because they have never...
^^^^
Line 4, column 180, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'contacted'.
Suggestion: contacted
... unethical for someone, who has had not contact, or knowledge of it, to be routinely ad...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...until all family members are cleared. Cow flu is a serious disease but not eno...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'make'.
Suggestion: make
...vent a pandemic, or just simply need to makes changes to decrease or contain the situ...
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Line 5, column 492, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...ation before drastic measure are taken. Whats best for the city as a whole needs to b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, lastly, may, so, then, therefore, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 39.0 19.6327345309 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.9520958084 162% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 11.1786427146 170% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 28.8173652695 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 55.5748502994 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2524.0 2260.96107784 112% => OK
No of words: 523.0 441.139720559 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82600382409 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78217453174 4.56307096286 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79971837558 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 204.123752495 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445506692161 0.468620217663 95% => OK
syllable_count: 825.3 705.55239521 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.67365269461 717% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 19.7664670659 132% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7060857028 57.8364921388 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0769230769 119.503703932 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1153846154 23.324526521 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.70786347227 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156489181632 0.218282227539 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057401340737 0.0743258471296 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430969959699 0.0701772020484 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100914069492 0.128457276422 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268459306803 0.0628817314937 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.3799401198 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.3550499002 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.5979740519 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 98.500998004 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.