There is now evidence that the relaxed pace of life in small towns promotes better health and greater longevity than does the hectic pace of life in big cities. Businesses in the small town of leeville report fewer days of sick leave taken by individual workers than do businesses in the nearby large cities of masonton. Furthermore , leeville has only one physician for its one thousand residents , but in Masonton the proportion of physicians to residents is five times as high. Finally , the average age of leeville residents is significantly higher than that of Masonton residents. These findings suggest that people seeking longer and healthier lives should consider moving to small communities.
Looking at the key points we need to state here is that the big town from this report is masonton and the small town is leeville and it is argued based on some positive statements as termed in economics that average life span is much greater in the small towns Leesville as compared to the big town masonton. Other relevant factors such facilities of medical services are more in the big city but hence accompanied with lots more sick leaves than in the small cities. We could further discuss this argument prompt based on some relevant assumptions and factors whom to my opinions could be some of the reasons this stated assumption.
Firstly we could look at some demographic features we could enable us understand that there is an always a high population density of countries population towards big cities as compared to small cities and this could be due to the fact that in big cities there lot more work facilities which population seek for as well as better paid jobs but forget to look at all the detriments it comes along with such as the increase in the crime waves in big cities as well as the high chance of infections by diseases which they could share among each other not forgetting the high emitting of carbon-dioxide expelled by which they expel after breathing in oxygen . This could hence be one of the reasons which drew to the conclusion that people seeking longer and healthier lives should consider moving to small communities which have a limited population , limited life opportunities but hence better health conditions hence people have to make a choice at the cost of the other which brings along the economics term opportunity cost.
Furthermore , in big cities , we could find a conglomerate of lots of industries servicing in this area as well as other jobs facilities such as finance institutions , insurance companies as well as transport and logistics sectors which help serve this industries in their daily operations but hence the externalities which this industries emit to the population in the form of toxic gases and waste turn to have a marginal social cost on the population than benefit and are one of the major reasons that jeopardize the health conditions of populations staying mostly in big cities and could be the reason the high sick leave incurred by workers in the population . We could as well assume that this high populations in cities could bring along a lot of engines such cars, lorries, bikes and tractors which daily emit toxic fumes which are harmful to the health of people and hence serve to be one of these findings suggest that people seeking longer and healthier lives should seek considering moving to small communities in which all this dangers will be avoided.
Conclusively from this justifications and reality of how this statistical findings has mentioned , it is also important to highlight to the fact that this health facilities as good for the human nature , it quit important to highlight to the fact that this big cities also come with its advantages such providing jobs to most people , improvement in technology and awareness to incoming vibrant activities to the economy which are mostly found in this big cities,
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 542 350
No. of Characters: 2623 1500
No. of Different Words: 231 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.825 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.839 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.619 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 168 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 121 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 89 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 66 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 54.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 24.677 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.443 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.668 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.224 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, look, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 11.1786427146 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 13.6137724551 169% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 28.8173652695 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 55.5748502994 135% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2652.0 2260.96107784 117% => OK
No of words: 542.0 441.139720559 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89298892989 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82502781895 4.56307096286 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65533677772 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 204.123752495 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.431734317343 0.468620217663 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 819.9 705.55239521 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 19.7664670659 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 22.8473053892 293% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 181.244611989 57.8364921388 313% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 331.5 119.503703932 277% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.75 23.324526521 290% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.75 5.70786347227 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.25449101796 305% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13075565501 0.218282227539 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805360111591 0.0743258471296 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831586611015 0.0701772020484 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980022457353 0.128457276422 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811821778492 0.0628817314937 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.5 14.3799401198 247% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.93 48.3550499002 25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.1628742515 204% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.2 12.197005988 231% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.27 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.32208582834 124% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 98.500998004 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 28.8 11.1389221557 259% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.9071856287 244% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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