Topic 6
Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over it. Unfortunately, according to reports from local hunters, the deer populations are declining. Since these reports coincide with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt, we can conclude that the purported decline in deer populations is the result of the deer's being unable to follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
In this argument, the author concludes that because the deer cannot across the frozen sea, the number of deer decrease. To justify this claim, the author points that local hunters reported that there were decline in deer populations. And he also cites that global warming lead to the sea ice to melt, which interrupt the deer's old migration patterns. However, the author needs to provide some evidence which may help us to evaluate the argument.
First, we would need to know whether the reports from the local hunters are true. It is possible that there is no decline in deer populations. For the...
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Sentence: In this argument, the author concludes that because the deer cannot across the frozen sea, the number of deer decrease.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a preposition
Suggestion: Refer to cannot and across
Sentence: To justify this claim, the author points that local hunters reported that there were decline in deer populations.
Description: A verb 'to be', past tense, 2nd person singular or all is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to were and decline
Sentence: On the contrary, if the author evidences that the local temperature were not increase or not increase largely, the claims may doubtable.
Description: The fragment the local temperature is not usually followed by were
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace were with was
Sentence: It may possible that the deer have migrated to other islands, where have more food.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to may and possible
Sentence: If there are many factories in local, which may pollute the water, the deer may died of drinking polluted water.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to may and died
argument 1 -- OK
argument 2 -- OK
argument 3 -- OK
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